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《新东方四级30天90分》作文学习笔记

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写作的重要性  6分最低限,只要结构不出错,得分应该为9分。
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四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。
内容不跑题即可,注意:1.不要妄图以情动人;2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。
结构上牢记总分总:先写主题句(Topic Sentence),再写分论点,最后写总结句(Conclusion)。
语言最重要,往往使评分产生重大差异,语言要模仿和包装。
基本表达
人们认为:it is generally/ widely believed/ held/ agreed that
越来越:be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of
万能理由(Omnipotence)
1. 方便:convenient/ convenience
2. 效率:efficient/ efficiently/ efficiency
3. 节省和浪费:save time/ money/ space; economical, thrift
                           waste time/ money/ space; costly, lavish
4. 人的心理健康:independent, cooperative, competitive,
                              considerate, confident, creative, sociable,
                              perseverance; selfish, isolated, conserative
5. 人的身体健康:health, disease, strong, strength, energetic
6. 娱乐:colorful, pleasure,joy, recreation, entertainmentm, relax
               tired, boring, lonely
7. 环境:environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty
8. 安全和危险:safe, danger, risk
9. 经验:experience, social experience, enter the society
10. 人际:humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely
写完之后修改注意:(内容方面尽量不要修改)
1、字母大小写
2、怪符号
3、单词拼写
4、主谓一致
5、动词时态
6、名词单复数
实例一
题目:Bicycles――An Important Means of Transport in China提纲:(1)为什么自行车在中国这样普及(2)和汽车的比较(3)自行车在中国的前途
Score: 8      
    Bicycle is an important means of transport in China. The important reason of it is the economy of Chinese. The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage. They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive. So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on. The other reason is the large population of China. All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport.    
    The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it. It doesn’t ask to build the garage like car. This point is very important to China, because of the lack of land. It isn’t too expensive, so Chinese can afford it. It doesn’t need any oil, and it can’t cause the polusion. All of these are the good needs compared to the car.
    In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will produce much more modern bicycles.
Score: 14
Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -- man and woman, old and young -- ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.
注:1. 第一句总写,第二句和第三句分写,最后总写。
        2. During the rush hour 分词结构开头。

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