GRE作文：3种开头段错误低分写法反向分析写法要点

　　好的开头是一篇作文成功的一半，对于GRE考试的作文来说也是如此。想要拿到高分难度会很高，而以下这些开头写法，正是考生特别需要注意避免的。

　　GRE作文失败开头：观点独断

　　案例：Topic - The importance of confidence

　　开头：In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

　　分析：GRE考试考察的能力之一就是逻辑性思维，考生在写作时应该特别注意客观性，不能主观臆断，比如上面这个开头，又是the most又是all，观点太过绝对独断，完全不给予讨论的空间和余地，作为作文开头来说显得太过幼稚，难以取得高分。

　　GRE作文失败开头：偏离主题

　　案例：Topic - It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (GRE真题)

　　开头：I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

　　分析：开头问对于某个观点是同意还是不同意，结果拉拉杂杂的写了一堆跟主题没有关系的内容，这样的写法让人住不住重点，完全偏离了需要展开论述的主题，会给考官留下不好的印象。

　　GRE作文失败开头：观点模糊

　　案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　开头1：I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 20, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

　　开头2：This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

　　分析：需要给出明确观点的时候绕来绕去不表明态度，而是说一些无关的废话，会给人留下骗字数的印象。建议考生在写作时开门见山，表明态度和观点。

　　以上是考生们在写作时可能比较容易写出来的低分开头，大家平时应多加留意，避免这些写法，通过练习写出好的GRE作文，并最终取得满意分数。