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剑桥雅思考官写作9分范文:运动设施与公众健康

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2017年04月18日

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本范文来自剑桥雅思,是近乎9分的存在。江湖有言:熟读剑雅一百遍,不会作文也会吟。你是拿来无脑背诵也好,一篇一篇品评研究也好,照着葫芦画瓢也好,都是对你的写作大有裨益的。个人建议:重点学习考官是如何入题,如何立论,如何论述,如何结尾,还有如何承接过渡的。总之就是学习这些范文的骨架是如何搭建的。

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.增加运动设施是提升公众健康水平的最好方法?

Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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A problem of modern societies is the declining level of health in the general population, with conflicting views on how to tackle this worrying trend. One possible solution is to provide more sports facilities to encourage a more active lifestyle.

Advocates of this believe that today’s sedentary lifestyle and stressful working conditions mean that physical activity is no longer part of either our work or our leisure time. If there were easy-to-reach local sports centres, we would be more likely to make exercise a regular part of our lives, rather than just collapsing in front of a screen every evening. The variety of sports that could be offered would cater for all ages, levels of fitness and interests: those with painful memories of PE at school might be happier in the swimming pool than on the school pitch.

However, there may be better ways of tackling this problem. Interest in sports is not universal, and additional facilities might simply attract the already fit, not those who most need them. Physical activity could be encouraged relatively cheaply, for example by installing exercise equipment in parks, as my local council has done. This has the added benefit that parents and children often use them together just for fun, which develops a positive attitude to exercise at an early age.

As well as physical activity, high tax penalties could be imposed on high-fat food products, tobacco and alcohol, as excessive consumption of any of these contributes to poor health. Even improving public transport would help: it takes longer to walk to the bus stop than to the car.

In my opinion, focusing on sports facilities is too narrow an approach and would not have the desired results. People should be encouraged not only to be more physically active but also adopt a healthier lifestyle in general.


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