剑13Test4小作文9分范文赏析：体育馆对比图

　　

 

　　The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

　　剑桥雅思小作文解析

　　关键在于把图中变化较大和变化没那么大的部分区分开。

　　变化小的部分：

　　这实际上也是 sports center 的核心部分，其中只有 gym 变成了大约2倍，其他部分没有变化。

　　不会表达的信息：这块区域，叫做 the sports centre building 或者 the main building

　　此外，这个区域的 changing room 和 seatings，共同叫做 swimming facilities

　　如果觉得文章字数过多，可以只写 swimming facilities

　　容易忽视的信息

　　gym 沿着 sports center 的北边，stretch along the north side，gym 扩张的方向是向东

　　2变化大的部分

　　按照编号的顺序

　　1. 西侧的 outdoor courts 变成了 lersure pool

　　2. 东侧的 outdoor courts 变成了 sports hall 和 dance studios

　　3. 前门的区域(包含 reception)，新增了 sports shop 和 cafe

　　以下范文，不是按照传统的“一幅图分一组”的方式写的，而是按照“变化大和变化小的区域各分一组”写的。

　　剑桥雅思小作文范文：

　　The upper map shows the plan of a university sports centre as it is now and the lower map shows the same building once it has been redeveloped.

　　主体段1：变化的总体介绍

　　Overall, the existing 25-metre pool and surrounding facilities will remain largely unchanged. However, the building will be substantially expanded by means of the addition of a leisure pool and a range of other new facilities.

　　主体段2：中间区域

　　Currently, the sports centre building consists only of a 25m pool, related swimming facilities and a gym that stretches along the north side. While the planned new sports centre will occupy around twice the current floorspace, these facilities will remain unchanged except that the gym will be significantly extended to the east.

　　主体段3：周围区域

　　Either side of the building at present, there are outdoor courts which will make way for a new leisure pool to the west of the main building, and a sports hall and two dance studios to the east. To the south of the 25m pool, the current reception area will be enlarged to accommodate a sports shop and café, on the west and east sides respectively. Finally, new changing rooms will be built in the south-west and south-east corners.

　　词汇解释

　　floor space

　　floor space, or floorspace is the area (measured as square feet or square metres) taken up by a building or part of it 占地面积