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雅思大作文议论文高分范文解析:男女话题

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2018年12月16日

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  Manand woman are different in terms of their characteristics and abilities. Forthis reason, some jobs are better done by men and others by women.

  Doyou agree or disagree?

  Key words analysis

  in terms of: 依据…、在…方面

  characteristics: 特征,在这里可以拓展为性格特征、心理特质、身体特性等

  abilities: 能力、才能,要注意在这个题目中特别指的是和工作相关的能力或才能

  be better done by …: 由… 完成的更好,这也是本题的重要讨论点,考虑的出发点就是,是否有些工作特别适合男性或女性

  Argument:

  这是属于议论文中的argument类型,通常会在agree或disagree之间进行选择。该题可采用通篇disagree的写作思路,因为人们普遍认为男女各有所长、各有分工,而采用disagree的角度比较新颖,使文章更有吸引力。

  Possible reasons:

  关于男女的传统观念不一定是正确的

  既有男员工也有女员工才能保持平衡

  个人能力和工作态度更重要,与性别无关

  Model Essay 1 – Part 1

  Introduction

  There are various of different perspectiveson the question of whether or not men and women are equally good at all jobs.Even if many people still believe that some kinds of work should only be doneby females and other kinds by males, it is my argument that both men and womenare able to do any job well. There are two main reasons for this.

  Main body 1

  At the first place, I would argue thattraditional ideas about men and women are not always right. It is certainlytrue that there are characteristics that are typically male and others whichare typically female; however, not everybody is typical. Not every woman isphysically weak, in the same way that not every man is a poor communicator –traditional gender roles do not fit everybody. A man who wants to do a jobnormally performed by women or a woman who wants to work in a male-dominatedindustry should be given the chance to demonstrate his/her ability.*

  Model Essay 1 – Part 2

  Main body 2

  Furthermore, I feel that having both maleand female employees in a workplace creates a sense of balance. The two sexesoften, though certainly not always, do things differently. Instead of seeingthese differences as weaknesses. I believe that we should view them as chancesto find new ways of doing things and thus improve the way we work. Therefore, aperson’s weak points can be turned into strengths.

  Conclusion

  To conclude, for the reasons stated above,I maintain that men and women can do any job equally well and that a person’sindividual ability is far more important than their gender in this regard.


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