雅思大作文议论文高分范文解析：旅游话题

　　Internationaltourism is now more common than ever before. Some feel that this a positivetrend, while others do not.

　　Whatare your opinions on this?

　　Key words analysis

　　International tourism: 国际旅游

　　More … than ever before: 比之前更加…

　　common: 普遍，常见。同义替换有ordinary, usual

　　Some feel that … while others …: 一些人觉得国际旅游的发展带来的正面效应多，而另一些人觉得还是负面效应多。这也是本文的论题。

　　Argument:

　　这是属于议论文中的argument类型，通常需要作者发表自己对于论题的观点。该题可采用发表个人见解，并给出论据进行支持。

　　Possible reasons:

　　国际旅游将发达国家的问题带入到发展中国家

　　国际旅游对许多地方造成了环境破坏

　　国际旅游影响了当地居民的正常生活

　　Model Essay 1 – Part 1

　　Introduction

　　International tourism has increasedconsiderably in the last 50 years. While this industry has certainly created agreat deal of wealth tor many destination countries, I believe that it hasactually caused far more problems than it has solved. The following are justtwo of the main difficulties involved with international tourism.

　　Main body 1

　　One particularly serious issue is thatinternational travel has brought western problems to developing countries. Onlywealthy people can afford to travel overseas. As a result, increasing numbersof tourists from rich (mostly western) countries now holiday in poorercountries like Thailand and Indonesia. In many of these places, this flood oftourists is closely associated with such problems as prostitution, alcoholismand drug abuse. Although international tourism can certainly bring peopletogether and create greater cross-cultural understanding, this will probablynot happen while it is still such a powerful sign of western power and lack ofmoral standards.

　　Model Essay 1 – Part 2

　　Main body 2

　　Even more worrying, however, is the damagethat international tourism has caused to the environment in many parts of theworld. Australia's Great Barrier Reef is an especially good example ofthis-large areas of coral reef have been slowly destroyed by the thousands ofboats, scuba divers and snorkelers that have visited it over the years.Likewise, Bali's famous Kuta Beach is now often covered in litter from thecrowds who go there. In order to maintain such tourist attractions, I feel wemust regulate international tourism more carefully.

　　Conclusion

　　To conclude, it is clear that the difficultiescreated by the growing international tourist trade are complicated and many.While they are certainly not impossible to overcome, I believe these problemswill probably continue for some time.