中考英语作文：Friendship (点评)

In our daily life, if we get on harmoniously with our friends, we’ll feel more joyous. But we’ll feel lonely without friends. When our friends feel upset or get ill, we shouldn’t ignore them or look down upon them. On the contrary, we ought to calm them down, show our love and concern to them and try our best to help them overcome the hardships. Sometimes we may have some misunderstandings or disagreements with our friends, thus we had better have a discussion with them and try to accept their good ideas instead of quarreling with them. As long as we can follow these good suggestions, we’ll find it easy to make more friends。

小编点评：本文中含有超纲重点词汇、亮点短语及句型。同学们阅读完后可以记录下来，运用到自己的写作中，以提高写作水平。

重点词汇分析：

Harmoniously：融洽地

Overcome：战胜

Misunderstandings：误解

亮点短语分析：

get on harmoniously with sb:与某人相处融洽

look down upon sb: 看不起某人，小看某人

On the contrary: 相反…

Ought to do sth: 应该做某事

try one’s best to do sth: 尽某人最大的努力做某事

had better do sth: 最好做某事

亮点句型分析：

if、as long as 引导条件状语从句；

when 引导的时间状语从句

使用On the contrary表达相反的观点，起到连接上下文作用