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  下面听力课堂给大家介绍几种”害死人“的开头方式,同学们可以参考自身情况来对号入座,看看你被哪种方式“害”了呢?

  “害死人”托福写作开头之一:过分简单没有重点(喷血指数:☆☆)

  典型失败案例:Topic-The importance of environmental protection

  This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

  “害死人”托福写作开头之二:用词不当 表达不准 (喷血指数:☆☆)

  典型失败案例:Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

  I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family。

  “害死人”托福写作开头之三:意思重复原地踏步(喷血指数:☆☆☆)

  典型失败案例:Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

  My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society。

  “害死人”托福写作开头之四:中国俗语胡乱翻译(喷血指数:☆☆☆☆☆)

  典型失败案例:Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

  I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

  正确说法:Happiness lies in having many children

  Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

  We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……

  Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

  Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

  Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

  I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”。

  “害死人”托福写作开头之五: 观点武断 态度强硬 (喷血指数:☆☆☆)

  典型失败案例:Topic1-The importance of confidence

  In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed。

  Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

  I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

  以上这几种失败的托福写作开头方式,不知同学们有没有用过,希望能给大家一个参考,避免以后托福写作中因此而拉低自己的写作分数。听力课堂建议大家在练习托福写作中,不要唯模板是从,在参照模板的过程中,一定要有自己的思考,换位思考,避免写作千篇一律,如果能有耳目一新的感觉,那么你的托福写作就会在你托福总成绩中居于上位。听力课堂祝大家学习愉快,托福考试取得好成绩!


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