怎么让托福写作更加完美？

　　学生们写的托福作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。

　　拼写错误

　　这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的误打，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。

　　乱用大词

　　表达中式

　　表意重复

　　?They shocked their friends， devastated their families， crushed their best friends.

　　前面已经提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。

　　? The show is so compelling but attractive.

　　?compelling和attractive是同义词，所以这里这么写就让人不明白。

　　固定用法错误

　　? To some extends， I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents

　　also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.

　　——To some extends应改为To some extent

　　例证夸张

　　? For example， when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer， the doctor

　　cannot tell the truth， for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.

　　虽然善意的谎言是必要的，但是其功效显然没有这么大。

　　成分多余

　　? According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese

　　Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of

　　university students who are taking part-time jobs.

　　该句中的shows that是多余的成分。

　　词性混乱

　　? However， the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your

　　husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.

　　句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing。

　　时态错误

　　托福作文一般使用现在时态，除了拿过去事件作为例子用过去时态。

　　? Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.

　　—— claimed应该改为claim

　　希望上面的常见的托福作文备考扣分点可以帮助大家提高托福写作成绩，取得优异的成绩，听力课堂预祝各位考试顺利，早日结束考试。