托福英语 学英语,练听力,上听力课堂! 注册 登录
> 托福 > 托福写作 >  列表

托福写作中的扣分点解析

所属教程:托福写作

浏览:

lishuai

随身学
扫描二维码方便学习和分享
  1、新托福作文扣分点之用词不当

  学生们写的托福作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题,但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。

  • In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly,

  they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.

  ——problems应改为questions

  2、新托福写作扣分点之拼写错误

  这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的误打,而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。

  • In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiring

  subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers.

  ——judgement应改为judgment

  3、托福写作扣分点之乱用大词

  First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much,

  but they will keep their salary gingerliness.

  这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该句子还有以下问题:

  1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职,因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;

  2)although和but是不能连用的;

  3)指代不明,they不知道是指代前面的什么;

  4、新托福作文扣分点之表达中式

  The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because

  parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.

  句子中划线部分的表达过于中式化。

  5、托福写作扣分点之表意重复

  •They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.

  前面已经提到了朋友,后面又提到朋友。

  • The show is so compelling but attractive.

  •compelling和attractive是同义词,所以这里这么写就让人不明白。

  6、托福写作扣分点之固定用法错误

  • To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents

  also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.

  ——To some extends应改为To some extent

  7、托福写作扣分点之例证夸张

  • For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor

  cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.

  虽然善意的谎言是必要的,但是其功效显然没有这么大。

  8、托福写作扣分点之成分多余

  • According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese

  Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of

  university students who are taking part-time jobs.

  该句中的shows that是多余的成分。

  9、托福写作扣分点之词性混乱

  • However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your

  husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.

  句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing。

  希望通过上面的新托福作文扣分点总结自己的失分点在那,多加注意,在托福写作备考中克服。


内容来自 听力课堂网:http://www.tingclass.net/show-7675-293923-1.html
用手机学英语,请加听力课堂微信公众号:tingclass123
用户搜索

疯狂英语 英语语法 新概念英语 走遍美国 四级听力 英语音标 英语入门 发音 美语 四级 新东方 七年级 赖世雄 zero是什么意思

  • 微信公众号:每日托福
  • [微信扫码,即可关注]
  • 关注有惊喜,经典托福资料免费送! 每天的精彩内容,不容错过。
  • 频道推荐
  • |
  • 全站推荐
  • 广播听力
  • |
  • 推荐下载
  • 网站推荐
0.093750