College students take up part-time jobs not for making more money， but for an opportunity to understand the society.
第一，用including，such as…， like…等词组
The mess media including TV， broadcast，newspaper，magazines，Internet，etc.
第二，用in view of ……搭配
Granted， the development of economy does have much positive effect on every respect of a country. The modern life of us will be much better in view of the higher level school， lower priced merchants， advanced hospital and the more convenient transportation.
First of all， the benefits from the academic studies are of great significance. Just imagine what we have learned in class： the mathematics， grammar， and the physics and so on. These are all basic knowledge and skills that are essential for further study and future career.
第四，用By doing sth， students can ….转换语气
By learning about those knowledge， behaviors of customers and producers， the tax policy， especially the value and functions of money， students
would ponder and contemplate the idea that there’s no easy money existing in the world and that their parents have been striving hard for their living. Hence， their naivety would gradually diminish， and they would correctly face the problem and setbacks in the society with a more sophisticated heart and judicious mind.
第五，用Even though… can trigge...转折，承上启下
Though all those fantastic stories， stimulating scenes and magical effects indeed trigger children’s imagination， their endlessly soaring minds would make them reluctant to leave the untrue world.
第六，用...can be attributed to...可以归因于……用来陈述原因
This difference can be attributed/ascribed to the cultural background.