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  比如教育话题下:

  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To achieve successful development of a country,a government should spend more money on young children's education rather than on universities。

  同意/不同意:为了一个国家的发展,政府应当花更多的钱在儿童教育上,而不是大学教育上。

  对于以上的话题,我们应该采取的可以用以下三步走的方式进行:

  第一步:找取题目中的关键词或者关键词总结为一个综合事件,突出其关注度以及其作用;

  比如题干里的关键词:money spent on young children’s education or universities; 又或者关键词被总结上升到了一个比较大的维度:the problem of education investment

  因此我们可以开头以上述方法写出:

  As is reported by mass media, the increasing number of individuals has attaches much importance to the problem of educational investment given by government which plays an irreplaceable role in accomplishing accelerated development of a country.

  the problem of educational investment given by government就是题目提取出的关键词总结事件,accomplishing accelerated development of a country就是这个事件的影响,

  第二步:确立自己的观点,接下来描述与自己对立观点下的一种具体现象和原因。也就达到了我们在讨论性的层面,但是这个方法更加具体详细。如下:

  influenced by pressure of difficulties in employment, some aggressive students strongly require more financial support to cross-culture-communication programs. (反方观点的现象)Such an emotional appeal is in the existence for the sake of accumulation of oversea experience as well as preparation for competitive challenges.(现象的原因)(一些激进的大学生强烈要求在跨文化交流项目上给予更多的经济支持,这样的一种情感诉求的存在其实还是为了海外经历的积累和对具有竞争性的挑战做准备。)

  第三步:善于运用转折逻辑词however/while/whereas 突出自己的观点,运用总结性正向形容词侧面突出个人观点,如下:

  However, it is sensible for a government to focus on investment in children’s education due to more benefits in the long term.

  那么综合在一起,就有了以下的高分开头段:

  As is reported by mass media, the increasing number of individuals has attaches much importance to the problem of educational investment supported by government which plays an irreplaceable role in accomplishing accelerated development of a country. influenced by pressure of difficulties in employment, some aggressive students strongly require more financial support to cross-culture-communication programs. Such an emotional appeal is in the existence for the sake of accumulation of oversea experience as well as preparation for competitive challenges. However, it is sensible for a government to focus on investment in children’s education due to more benefits in the long term.


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