Dear Sir ,
I would like to apply for your university as a Master's degree student in Financial Management next September.
I am in the fourth year of undergraduate studies at Wuhan University and I will receive a Bachelor of Arts in Finance in July. It has been my dream to pursue graduate studies at California University, an institution well-known for its excellent faculty and students as well as the strong leadership in the field of Finance. I am confident that I would benefit a lot from the rich academy and cultural community of your university.
As requested, I have sent two recommend- ation letters, an original copy of my university transcript, and a copy of my TOEFL certificate. Please also find attached my completed application form.
Thank you very much for your consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
I am delighted to tell you that you have been admired to be one of our students. Congratulations to you. Enclosed is some information of enrolling. It includes the last time to enroll in and the fees. Please read them carefully. If you have some questions, you can ask us for help at any time.
If you accept the offer, you should fill a form which is enclosed in the letter, and send it to us as the address in the letter. If you don't accept the offer, please fill another form in the letter and send it to us.
Welcome you go to the university early!
I am sorry to notify you that you fulfill the condition of our university. Your transcript is very good. But your score of TOEFL does not fulfill our requirement. I am pleased that you apply for our university. Welcome you to apply our university next time. If you have any questions, you could e-mail to us or learn from the website of our university.
Wish you have a good result in your TOEFL!