Dear Sir or Madam，
I am a sophomore in Cornell University. I major in computer science and technology. In the university, I try my best to study and never disobey the rules of my college. Certainly, I am also economical in my life.
I would like to explain why I apply for bank loan. I come from an average family. My parents have no special technology, so their salary is very low. What's worse, my college's tuition is more expensive than other colleges. In my college, I must spend about 13 thousand dollars every year. Undoubtedly, it is a heavy burden to my family. So I hope I can apply for 10 dollars successfully, and then my parents' pressure will reduce a lot.
I'm an honest man. I guarantee that I will pay back the bank loan in two years after graduation. I will spend all the money on my tuition and fees. Dear sir or madam, please believe in me, I need bank loan very much.
Wish you good health! Thank you very much!!
I have checked your information and know that it is very difficult for your family to support your study in the university. After the review, we have already approved your loan. The money will be released to your bank card every year. Please check and confirm on time. But if you make a big mistake or do not well in your study, we will consider stopping your loan. Please keep your attitude like before. Wish you get more achievement in your study. You should do some procedures of repayment before you graduate. Thank you for your cooperation.
We have received your loan application. But we still have to do some check to determine whether we can give you the loan. The material you send to us is not completed, such as the work units of your parents. We hope that you could send these materials to us on time. If your application is admitted, we will inform you. Then we will call you to sign some papers. I hope you can wait our note patiently and make great progress in your study.
Wish you good luck!