商务沟通英语口语视频教程(高级)：44_Writing Relevant and Concise Messages

Did you see the message posted on the bulletin board, Mark?

马克，你看到张贴在公告栏上的信息了吗?

I saw something there this morning, but I didn't pay attention to it. Why?

今天早上我看到了什么东西,但是我并没有注意。为什么这样问?

I just thought it was a strange message.

我只是认为这条消息很奇怪。

For one thing, I don't think the content is relevant to our office.

首先，我认为它的内容与我们办公并不相关。

I was also offended by the sexist language.

对这些性别歧视的语言，我也感到很生气。

What was the topic of the message?

消息的主题是什么?

The key point was criticizing the company's lack of employee accountability.

重点是批评公司缺乏员工问责制。

But the message was several pages long. I didn't read the whole thing.

但这条消息长达几页，我并没有全部读完。

Sounds like someone needs to learn how to make their messages more concise.

听起来好像某人需要学习如何使他们的信息更简洁。