(一) 内容要点:
1. 描述文字说明:
1) 学生被迫上很多补习班
2) 无兴趣可言
2. 议论文字说明:
1) 太多的补习班是浪费时间
2) 学习要有兴趣
3) 家长不要强迫孩子参加补习
4) 表达希望
(二)One possible version:
Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to go to so many training classes besides his school classes. Life is no fun at all for him. Holidays and weekends have become dull work-days. He is too tired to learn these lessons well with no interest.
In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning. Please don’t force these students to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than we expect!
(三)文章结构和套语:
Look at this picture. You will understand better “Too much work makes Jack a dull boy”. He has to … besides his school classes. Life is …. … have become …. He is …
In my opinion, … for many students. They might …when they … what they are learning. Please don’t …what they…, and when learning is fun, surely …