「考研满分作文」建议信：建议老师改进教学
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Dear Professor Whitman,
Last week you asked us to give you feedback on your lectures. My thoughts are outlined below.
In general, I find your lectures very informative and inspiring. Indeed, I particularly like the way you demonstrate complex issues-using simple PPTs. This makes your lessons both interesting and memorable. However, I do feel that you should provide us with more handouts, as I often don't have time to take down all the important points. I would also like to be involved in more class discussions, as I find that this method could deepen my understanding of the subject.
I'd like to thank you for your attention given to us. I look forward to your next lecture.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
尊敬的惠特曼教授：
上周您让我们对您的课进行反馈。我的想法概括如下：
总的来说，我发现您的课既可以增进知识，又颇具启发性。实际上，我特别喜欢您用简单的PPT来说明复杂问题的方式。这使得您的课既有趣又令人印象深刻。不过，因为我经常没时间记下所有的要点，我确实觉得您应该提供给我们更多的讲义。我还想参与更多的课堂讨论，因为我发现课堂讨论可以加深我对这门课的理解。
我想感谢您对我们的关注。期待您下次上课。
您真诚的，
李明
道长点评
建议信的首段应表明写作意图，并简要介绍自己;要注意语气，切勿啰唆。次段应针对某情况提出具体建议或忠告，应先肯定优点，再写需要改进之处，否则对方以为是投诉而非建议。末段应总结建议，注意礼貌。写信时应时刻考虑收信人的感受。
feedback 反馈
lecture 讲课
thought 想法
outline 概述
informative 增进知识的
inspiring 启发灵感的
demonstrate 说明
complex 复杂的
issue 问题
memorable 容易记住的
handout 讲义，材料
discussion 讨论
deepen 加深
understanding 理解
subject 课程
1 I am writing this letter to propose some pertinent recommendations to you in regard to your teaching.
我写这封信是想对您的教学工作提出一些相关建议。
2 I hope you will find these proposals useful/practical.
我希望您会发现这些建议有用/很实用。
3 I trust you will take my suggestions into account.
我相信您会考虑我的建议。
4 You have asked me for my advice with regard to your teaching, and I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
您问我对您的教学工作有什么建议，我会试着给出一些建设性的意见。
5 I would be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
我会很乐意看到这方面有所改进。
