2014年6月大学英语六级写作实例讲评（一）

　　For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes t owrite a short essay entitle My View on Plastic Surgery. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.

　　1 越来越多的人接受整容手术

　　2 我的看法及理由

　　3 结论

　　题目分析：

　　观点论证型作文要求对某一问题发表自己的看法。通常要在首段提出话题，以及关于此话题不同的反应，并表明自己的观点，接下来要在主题段落里论述理由，最后在结尾重申一下自己的观点。

　　参考范文：

　　My View on Plastic Surgery

　　In recent years, more and more people, especially some young girls choose to take plastic surgeries. Some people argue that this kind of surgery can improve one’s appearance, thus secure a good job. Others hold a different opinion, they consider plastic surgery as a waste of money. Personally, I agree with the latter.

　　Firstly, beauty is only skin-deep, as the saying goes, virtue is more important than appearance. Plastic surgery cannot improve one’s character. Who do you think is more popular, an ordinary girl with charming personality, or a beautiful girl with arrogant manner? Secondly, success relies on one’s abilities but not appearance. Some people, especially young girls dream to find a good job after taking plastic surgery. For example, it takes one at least 30,000 Yuan to have double eyelid. Fourthly, people have to bear the risks of an unsuccessful surgery which will be a lifelong pain.

　　All in all, it is not advisable for people to take plastic surgeries. We can get what we want by improving our inner qualities, such as our personality and ability, and there is no need to endure the pains and economic loss of a plastic surgery.

　　好词佳句总结：

　　Beauty is only skin-deep, as the saying goes

　　就像俗语所说的那样，外在美不过是表面现象

　　bear the risks 承担风险

　　competent and well-trained people 有真才实学的人

　　arrogant 傲慢的，自大的

　　must 作名词使用

　　e.g.His new novel is a must for all lovers of crime fiction