2014年12月英语六级作文冲刺：高分策略
写作和翻译：实质就是汉译英：汉译英的障碍就是语法和词汇——语法：语序+嵌套
形式最重要!!!高级词汇+复杂局势+过渡衔接
字数：120~180
核心语法定语从句：
A is …, which can …
身份/属性;成就和功能。
爱心：Love is a kind of emotional strength, which can support us no matter how dark the world around us becomes and how hard the way ahead will be.
替换词friendship; knowledge; family; diligence; insisting; determination; optimism; harmony
替换词：合作精神;勤奋;友谊;家庭;坚持;决心;乐观;和谐——the greatest humanistic spirit
…是我们时代的主题(the theme of our era)
流行与时尚 fashionable
网络：Internet is a kind of great invention in the 20th century, which can make the peoplefar away from each other in distance closer than ever before.
空调：Air-conditioner is a kind of invention in the 20th century, which can make the temperature comfortable.
总结：主题词发出两个动作：性质+能力
看到图怎么办?
非限定性定语从句——正如这幅第一眼看上去诙谐可笑但第二眼看上去发人深省的图画生动地描述，给我印象最为深刻的显著特征是……
As is vividly depicted in the picture which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on the second thoughts, the most striking feature that impresses me profoundly is that Spring, one of the realest men throughout the history of mankind all around the whole world that I have ever seen in my entire life, who is thebest that there ever was and the best that there ever will be, is a good teacher that is momentous and fundamental to anyone who want to win the future what the light is vital and significant to the people who desire to break through the dark，and that can support us to realize our vision and achieve our goals no matter how dark the world around us becomes and how hard the way ahead will be, because without him, we could have done nothing, including dream, success, hope and future.
观点对比类议论文A or B?
第一段：引出主题+一方观点 第二段：另一方观点 第三段：个人观点
第一段：首句
①万能句型：What this thought-provoking drawing mirrors is the phenomenon that …
“网络的利与弊”Most of individuals spend too much time on their computer terminal rather than relating to people in the real world.
“环境污染” What this thought-provoking drawing mirrors is the phenomenon that the environment of tourist areas is polluted by tourists.
万能句型：The phenomenon of …has been known for years. 某种现象或问题普遍存在或由来已久。
The problem of tourist pollution has been known for years in today’s China.
“追星” The phenomenon of idolatry has been known for years in today’s China.
“过度开采“ The phenomenon of overexploitation has been known for years in today’s China.
②There is no consensus of opinions among people regarding whether + 主题句.
③“认为，想”怎么说?
Some people hold the attitude that +主题句的肯定或否定.
Some individuals are under the impression that +主题句的肯定或否定.
④原因如下：1，2，3…The reasons can be listed as follows.
Firstly…
Secondly…
Thirdly…
第二段：另一方观点
①观点对比之间的过渡句
Just as an old Arab proverb says, “Every coin has its two sides”.
Just as an old Arab proverb says, “Every sword has its two edges.”
② 提出另一方观点：On the contrary, others are under the impression that…
③ 分论点：There are some reasons behind this attitude.
For one thing…
For another…
第三段： 你认为…
★表明立场
①From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the former opinion rather than the latter one.
★得出结论
②From what has been discussed above, we may naturally arrive at the conclusion that…
★喊口号
③Generally speaking, it is high time that we placed great emphasis on this issue. That is to say, further attention is to be paid to this issue.
★谈措施
④Only through effective actions that has been taken can we prevent this trend.
问题阐释：What caused this problem, and what solutions can solve this problem?
第一段：背景主题
第二段：分析原因
第三段：解决方案
第一段：背景主题(4句)
①In this age of change, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts.
②Yet at the same time, many problems have arisen, a serious one of which is …
③This issue has drawn widespread attention.
④In this essay, I will analyze some possible causes of this phenomenon and then propose some solutions.
第二段：分析原因(4句)
①It is obvious that the causes of this issue are diverse.
②In the first place, … is the root cause of this crisis.
③In the second place, … constitutes a major cause of this situation.
④Finally, … plays a pivotal role in this problem
第三段：解决方案(4句)
①Accordingly, the solution to this problem should be varied as well.
②To begin with, governments and relevant administrations should take effective measures and spare no effort to control this problem.
③What is more, it is necessary to raise people’s awareness of…
④Only when these practical measures are taken can this problem be dealt with step by step and gone with the wind.
以上就是四六级考试中作文部分的拿分策略，祝大家取得好成绩!
