英语六级命题作文：如何保护好网络隐私?
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- 重点句背诵与仿写
How to Protect Privacy on Internet?
Do you worry that your private information such as address, salary or telephone number on Internet will be let out without your permission? This has become the common for many people.
The hot discussion on how to Protect Privacy on Internet has lasted for these years. The following several reasons are approved by the mainstream of the society. For one thing, our government is expected to make stricter laws or regulations to Protect Privacy on Internet from leaking out. For another, both mass media and schools should educate people to keep their promises and seal their mouths on others' privacy. Besides, in some fields, personal information has been transacted for pursuing profits. And therefore cutting off the profitable chain plays a vital role in protecting personal privacy.
Could you imagine that we're relaxing, listening to music or surging on Internet at home while our personal information is spreading or even being exchanged illegeally? Only if privacy is protected effectively and create a clean cyber environment, can people feel at ease to surge the web. (180 words)
结构剖析
文章分为三段
文章第一段说明人们在网上的信息得不到很好的保护的现状。
第二段着重分析了应该如何保护隐私。首先，政府应该制定更严格的法律保护隐私。其次，大众传媒和校方应该教育人们不随意泄漏他人隐私。另外，也要加强监管杜绝个人信息的非法交易。
第三段阐述了保护好个人网络隐私的重要性。
如何保护好网络隐私?
你是否担心你网上的私人信息，如地址、工资或电话号码在未经你许可的情况下被泄露呢?这对许多人来说已变得很常见了。
就如何保护网络隐私的热烈讨论已经持续了多年。以下几个原因是社会主流普遍认可的。一方面，我们的政府有望制定更严格的法律或规范，以防止互联网上的隐私泄露。另一方面，大众媒体和学校应教育人们遵守承诺，对他人的隐私守口如瓶。此外，在某些领域，为追求利润，个人信息被拿来做交易。因此，切断这种利润链在保护个人隐私中起着非常重要的作用。
你能想像到，当我们正在家放松、听音乐或上网时，我们的个人信息正在传播，甚至被非法交换吗?只有有效地保护隐私，才能创造一个干净的网络环境，人们才能安心地在网上冲浪。
let out 泄漏
permission n. 同意，许可，允许
mainstream n. 主流
make laws 制定法律
leak out 泄漏
keep one's promise 信守承诺
seal one's mouth 守口如瓶
transact v. 办理，交易
pursue profits 逐利
cut off 切断
profitable chain 利益链
surge the web 上网
1. The hot discussion on how to Protect Privacy on Internet has lasted for these years. The following several reasons are approved by the mainstream of the society. 就如何保护网络隐私的热烈讨论已经持续了多年。以下几个原因是社会主流普遍认可的。
2. And therefore cutting off the profitable chain plays a vital role in protecting personal privacy. 因此，切断这种利润链在保护个人隐私中起着非常重要的作用。
3. Only if privacy is protected effectively and create a clean cyber environment, can people feel at ease to surge the web. 只有有效地保护隐私，才能创造一个干净的网络环境，人们才能安心地在网上冲浪。
