英语六级命题作文：网络活动
- 经典范文
- 结构剖析
- 参考译文
- 亮点词汇
- 重点句背诵与仿写
Activities on Internet
The above table depicts a clear map of Internet application during the past two years. It's easy to find that online music, online news and search engine still rank the top three among all the online activities.
Making a general survey of the chart, there is a distinct change which deserves your attention, that is, commercial transaction on the network rockets up between 2012 and 2013 and its growth rates rank from top one to top five, especially for the online payment, hotel booking and online stocks transaction because doing business on Internet is more convenient and efficient, and thus some network stations like taobao thrives. In contrast with the fast increase of the online commercial application, the traditional activities on Internet such as instant messages and online videos develop with a comparatively slow speed.
In line with my analysis, the application on the network is opt to be more commercial while the conventional usage on Internet like searching information and communication will develop in a stable speed. In a word, Internet will be commerce-oriented and recreation-oriented in the future. (183 words)
结构剖析
文章分为三段
文章第一段概述了上表所示的主要信息，即网络音乐、网络新闻和搜索引擎。
第二段总结了过去两年中互联网应用的主要变化。首先，互联网商务交易的应用方面增长很快。其次，互联网传统的应用模式则发展较慢。
第三段总结了作者对于对于互联网应用的发展方向判断，互联网的商务应用将会进一步发展。
网络活动
上表是一张有关过去两年的互联网应用的清晰图表。显而易见，在所有的网上活动中，在线音乐，网络新闻和搜索引擎仍然排在前三名。
对图表做个大概的调查，你会注意到有一个明显的改变，那就是2012年至2013年网上的商务交易激增，它的增长率排名占据了前五位。尤其是网上付款，酒店预订和在线的股票交易，因为在网上做生意更加便捷和有效。因此一些网站，如淘宝网，也蓬勃发展起来了。相比于网上商业应用的快速增长，传统的网络活动发展速度相对缓慢，如即时消息和在线视频。
根据我的分析，网络应用更倾向于商业化了，而对网络传统的使用，例如搜索信息和沟通，会以稳定的速度发展。总之，未来互联网将会以商业和娱乐为主。
search engine 搜索引擎
make a general survey of 纵观
rocket up 快速增长
rank n. 等级，阶层，排，列 v. 分等级，排列，列为
booking n. 预约
thrive v. 蓬勃发展，繁荣，茁壮成长
instant message 即时消息
online video 网络视频
in line with 根据
stable adj. 稳定的，可靠的
1. The above table depicts a clear map of Internet application during the past two years. 上表是一张有关过去两年的互联网应用的清晰图表。
2. In contrast with the fast increase of the online commercial application, the traditional activities on Internet such as instant messages and online videos develop with a comparatively slow speed. 相比于网上商业应用的快速增长，传统的网络活动发展速度相对缓慢，如即时消息和在线视频。
3. In line with my analysis, the application on the network is opt to be more commercial while the conventional usage on Internet like searching information and communication will develop in a stable speed. 根据我的分析，网络应用更倾向于商业化了，而对网络传统的使用，例如搜索信息和沟通，会以稳定的速度发展。
