六级高分作文_关于信任
关于信任
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on trust by commenting on the remark, “We are always paid for our suspicion by finding what we suspect .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据引语的内容就“信任”这一话题进行阐述，并提出自己的观点。
2. 文章立意：信任是人们之间真诚交流的基础，对维系人们之间真正的感情非常重要、不可或缺。信任也是构建和谐社会的重要因素。因此，人们彼此之间要相互信任。
写作思路
1. 第一段引入引语并解释其内涵。
2. 第二段从人际交往方面阐述信任的重要性。
3. 第三段从构建和谐社会的角度阐述信任的重要性。
参考范文
“We are always paid for our suspicion by finding what we suspect.” 1 The remark, which reveals the great harm suspicion does, stresses the importance of trust. 2
I agree that trust is indispensable to maintaining genuine relationships among people. 3 Everyone in the world cannot live without interacting with other people. Otherwise, life would be dull and meaningless. Trust is the basic foundation for people to communicate with each other. Without trust, we cannot get along well with others, let alone cooperate with them.
In addition, I maintain that trust is also essential to our country’s efforts to build a harmonious society. 4 Our country is dedicated to building a world full of honesty, friendship, and justice, where people are able to engage in fair and open competition. Harmonious society calls for trust and honesty as well as the strong power to eradicate the crisis of confidence partly resulting from the dishonesty of some manufacturers and businessmen who make or sell shoddy goods in pursuit of profit. In the long run, they will lose potential customers and even cause their companies to shut down. They pose a great threat to the building of a harmonious society.
“我们总是因为要找出我们怀疑的东西，而付出怀疑的代价。”这句话揭示了怀疑所带来的极大的危害，也强调了信任的重要性。
信任对于维系人们之间真正的感情是不可或缺的，我同意这种观点。世上的每一个人都不能不与别人接触，否则，生活就会变得乏味而没有意义。信任是人们相互沟通的基础。没有信任，我们就不能与他人融洽相处，更别提与人合作了。
同时，我认为信任对于我国构建和谐社会的努力也必不可少。我们的国家正致力于构建一个充满真诚、友善和公正的世界，一个人们可以公平、公开竞争的世界。和谐社会需要信任和诚实，需要强大力量从根本上消除信任危机，而这种信任危机部分上是由一些为追求利益制造或销售不合格产品的商家或生产商的不诚信造成的。从长远来看，他们会失去潜在的顾客，甚至导致公司的倒闭。他们是构建和谐社会的一大威胁。
范文点评
1. 开篇引用引语，意在引出话题。
2. 准确阐释引语含义，意在引出中心思想。
3. 阐述关于信任的第一个观点：信任对于维系人们之间真正的感情不可或缺。
4. 阐述关于信任的第二个观点：信任对于构建和谐社会必不可少。
要点用法
suspicion n. 怀疑；嫌疑
suspect v. 怀疑；猜想
be indispensable to 对……不可或缺
genuine relationship 真正的关系
dull adj. 乏味的，无趣的
let alone 更不必说
be dedicated to doing sth. 致力于做某事
harmonious society 和谐社会
call for 要求，需要
crisis of confidence 信任危机
in the long run 从长远来看
pose a great threat to 对……构成很大威胁
句法点评
1. In addition, I maintain that trust is also essential to our country’s efforts to build a harmonious society.
此句中，I maintain that...意为“我认为……”，类似的句式还有：I hold that..., I assume that...等。
2. In the long run, they will lose potential customers and even cause their companies to shut down.
此句中in the long run表示“从长远来看”，是逻辑性修饰语，使得观点的表述具有更强的逻辑性。cause sb. to do sth.意为“导致某人做某事”，应多积累相关表达方式。
