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2022年07月24日

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 住得越来越近,距离越来越远

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the neighborhood in modern society . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

审题立意

1. 导语解读:要求考生描述图画内容并就现代社会的邻里关系发表自己的看法。

2. 文章立意:邻里关系很淡漠,有的邻里之间甚至从不沟通和交往。因此,构建和谐的邻里关系,促进人们之间的互信及和谐十分重要。

写作思路

1. 第一段简要描述漫画内容及注解文字,提出现代人不重视邻里关系这一现象。

2. 第二段通过分层论证的方式阐述邻里之间缺乏沟通的原因。

3. 第三段论述邻里关系的重要性,强调邻里之间要加强沟通。

参考范文

As is vividly depicted in the picture, two women living door to door are asking the surname of each other as if they are complete strangers. As a matter of fact, one has lived here for 5 years while the other for 6 years. 1 The message conveyed in this picture is self-evident: modern people attach less importance to the relations with their neighbors. 1

Two reasons can explain this phenomenon. In the first place 2 , modern Chinese are more mobile. Instead of settling down in the same place for life, city dwellers especially the young are accustomed to changing their residency and houses. As a result, a harmonious neighborhood has weakened in their life. In the second place 2 , modern people attach more importance to privacy. They do not hope to interfere with others’ business. Meanwhile, they do not want their own personal life intervened.

From my perspective, neighbors are among the most intimate groups of people we deal with and the relations with neighbours should be highly valued, for a harmonious neighborhood contributes vastly to cultivating a social climate of honesty and trustworthiness. 3 We have every reason to believe that we can build a better world through developing a harmonious neighborhood. 4

图片生动地描绘了两个门对门住着的女人正在互问姓氏,好像她们之间完全是陌生人似的。但事实上,一个人已经在这里住了五年,而另一个住了六年。图片传达的信息不言而喻:现代人不太重视邻里关系。

有两种原因可以解释这种现象。首先,现代中国人的流动性更强,比起在一个地方定居度过一生,城市居民,尤其是年轻人,习惯不断改变他们的住所或房子。结果导致和谐的邻里关系渐渐在他们的生活中弱化。其次,现代人更注重隐私,他们不想干涉他人的事情,同时也不想让别人干涉自己的生活。

在我看来,邻居是和我们相处的最亲密的群体之一,邻里关系应该受到高度重视,因为和谐的邻里关系对培养诚实和相互信赖的社会风气大有裨益。我们完全有理由相信,通过培养和谐的邻里关系,我们可以让世界变得更加美好。

范文点评

1. 开篇简要描述漫画的内容,并结合漫画里的文字阐释漫画的寓意。

2. 分两个层次论述了邻里缺乏沟通的原因,论据充分,论证有力。

3. 末段首句明确表明自己的观点:邻里关系应该受到重视。并且指出原因:和谐的邻里关系对培养诚实和相互信赖的社会风气大有裨益。

4. 以憧憬未来的方式结束全文,重申观点,深化主题。

要点用法

convey v. 传达

self-evident adj. 不言而喻的

attach…to… 把……放在……

dweller n. 居民

be accustomed to 习惯于

residency n. 住处

harmonious adj. 和谐的

weaken v. 渐弱;减弱

interfere with 干扰;干涉

intimate adj. 亲密的

contribute to 有助于

trustworthiness n. 信赖

句法点评

1. The message conveyed in this picture is self-evident: modern people attach less importance to the relations with their neighbors.

此句中的The message conveyed in this picture is self-evident...是漫画作文中常用的句式,用以说明漫画传递的真实含义。

2. Two reasons can explain this phenomenon.

此句式是解释原因的常用句式,简单明了。


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