话题十七：观点论证 Writing 5 高考英语高分范文1

Writing 5 　［2013年高考上海卷 ］上海博物馆拟举办一次名画展，现就展出场所（博物馆还是社区图书馆）征集公众意见。假设你是王敏，给上海博物馆写一封信表达你的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：

1．简述你写信的目的及你对场所的选择；

2．说明你的理由（从便利性、专业性等方面对这两个场所进行对比）。

高分范文1

Dear Sir or Madam，

Hearing that Shanghai Museum has an inclination to hold a public exhibition concerning famous paintings，I'm writing to put forward my individual suggestions with regard to the location．From my perspective，the advantages of neighborhood libraries far outweigh those of museums for the reasons as follows．

First and foremost，its merit of convenience can't be ignored since neighborhood libraries can be approachable to people throughout the entire city while museums are mostly situated in the city center，which is beyond the reach of many citizens because of the heavy traffic and crowd．People can choose to go to the neighborhood libraries whenever they like and the time they spend is far less，thus leading to their satisfaction and concentration on the masterpieces．Furthermore，a museum may serve as an obstacle to amateurs since they will probably feel that the paintings in the museums are too professional for them to understand and enjoy．In the meantime，neighborhood libraries help create a relaxing atmosphere，attracting more citizens and making better use of the distinguished works．Last but not least，the cost is sure to be taken into consideration．As to you，renting neighborhood libraries saves quite a large amount of money，which can be used to take in more paintings．As far as we citizens are concerned，the expense of a museum may be a little high．

To put it in a nutshell，I hope that you can adopt my advice．Of course，as an art-lover myself，I'll be one of the first to participate in your exhibition．

Yours，

Wang Min