高考英语满分作文:2015年湖南卷

2015年湖南卷

Directions: Write an English composition according to theinstructions given below.

请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给的句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。

    As a student, I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.

注意：

1. 将所有句子写在答题卡上；     2. 续写词数不少于120个；

3. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

[写作提示]

    1．本题为开放类作文，主题为“当众受到老师的表扬”。写作时人称主要采用第一人称，时态主要为一般过去时。

    2．写作步骤：

    (1)续写一件当众受到老师表扬的经历；    (2)总结这次经历对自己产生的影响。

【满分作文】

Asa student，I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by myteacher before my classmates．Never will I forget one experience in an English class last year．

Ifelt extremely nervous the instant the class began．The reason was that the newEnglish teacher Mr.Zhang might announce the exam result and that I wouldprobably get scolded as before．Surprisingly，when entering the classroom，he glanced at us，saying gently，“Today，I won’t talk about the exam result, but I am excited to tell you LiJia wrote an excellent English article in the exam．I do hope he will make moreprogress with great efforts．”On hearing what he said，I couldn’t hold back my tears．It was for the first time that I got praised before my classmates．From then on，I fell in love with English．You can’t imagine howgrateful I am to Mr.Zhang．Without his praise．I couldn’t have gone so far in my English study．

作为一名学生，我可以告诉你，没有什么比在同学面前被老师表扬更好的了。我永远不会忘记去年在英语课上的一次经历。

上课一开始，我就感到极度紧张。原因是新来的英语老师张老师可能会宣布考试结果，我可能会像以前一样被骂。出乎意料的是，当他走进教室时，他看了我们一眼，温和地说:“今天，我不谈论考试成绩，但我很兴奋地告诉你们，李佳的英语作文在考试中写得很好。”我希望他通过努力能取得更大的进步。”听了他的话，我忍不住流下了眼泪。这是我第一次在同学面前受到表扬。从那时起，我爱上了英语。你无法想象我是多么感激张先生。没有他的赞美。我的英语学习不可能走得那么远。