高考英语满分作文:2018年江苏卷2

2018年江苏卷

书面表达(满分25分)

请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

【写作内容】

1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名( ratings)进行消费的现象；

2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名，然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

【写作要求】

1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3.不必写标题

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

【满分范文】

Possible version two:

   Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certainchannels. These ratings,  easy to access,are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision.However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.

   There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience toconsumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, mostof the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or serviceconcerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychologicalstate. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our ownjudgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are theoutcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become acommon practice for some to pay

for good ratings on their products orservices so as to increase their sales.

   Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we goshopping.

可能的版本2:

如今，大多数商品或服务都是通过一定的渠道进行评级的。这些易于获取的评级在消费者的购买决策中扮演着越来越重要的角色。然而，结果有时并不令人满意。

不可否认，这样的评级给消费者带来了便利，但往往具有误导性和不可靠。我们都知道，大多数的评级是基于他人对相关产品或服务的判断。每一个判断都来自于一种特定的需求或一种独特的心理状态。显然，盲目听从别人的建议会影响我们自己的判断。另一个不应被忽视的事实是，一些评级是公司或卖方精心操纵的结果。对一些人来说，付费已经成为一种惯例

对他们的产品或服务的良好评价，以增加他们的销售。

因此，我们在购物时应该重新考虑这些评级。