高考英语满分作文:2020全国卷III

2020全国卷III

假定你是李华, 你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教MissEvans写封邮件, 请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括：1.剧情简介；2.指导内容；3.商定时间地点。

注意：1.词数100左右;2.结束语已为你写好。

(范文)

Dear Miss Evans,

I am writing to ask you a favorregarding a play we adapted according to the textbook.

We’d like to combine your culture withours by adapting the classic novel The Steamboat for a short Englishplay. The play is set on a big storm after midnight, on the raft down the rivernavigation, we see a steamboat that is going to sink. We saved a scared boy.However, the adaption is quite a challenge. Having written the English script,we don’t want anything inappropriate to spoil the play. So would you pleasespare some time to review the draft script attached to this email and makenecessary changes? If it is convenient, may I call at your office next Mondayafter school to give you more details?

I’d appreciate it if you offer me someprofessional advice. Looking forward to your early reply. Best regards!

Yourstruly,

LiHua

(译文)

亲爱的埃文斯小姐,

我写信是想请你帮个忙，关于我们根据教科书改编的一个剧本。

我们想把你们的文化和我们的文化结合起来，把经典小说《汽船》改编成一个英语短剧。该剧的背景是一场午夜后的大风暴，在木筏上沿河航行，我们看到一艘快要沉没的汽船。我们救了一个吓坏了的男孩。然而，改编是一个相当大的挑战。写完英文剧本后，我们不希望有任何不妥之处破坏这部戏。所以您是否可以抽出一些时间来审阅附件中的草稿，并做出必要的修改?如果方便的话，我可以在下周一放学后到你办公室拜访一下，告诉你更多的细节吗?

如果你能给我一些专业的建议，我会很感激的。期待你的早日回复。最好的问候!

敬启,

李华