My most impressive friends
我印象最深刻的朋友
【名师简评】
2014年12月20日
四级真题，写作部分延续了2014年6月14日
四级写作的出题风格，具有以下四大大特点：
1.反押题：
此次作文，依旧没有考察“热点”的“环境、文化、网络”等大话题，而是“平民草根、接地气”;
2.易审题：
依旧没有考察考生“审题能力”以及“跑题偏题”的可能性，作文的主题非常开放而明显，所有考生都有话好说;
3.重语言：
主题明确，不会跑题，考生比拼的就是“语言质量”本身了。一篇不再“假大空”的文章，注定不需要使用太多“大而华丽的空洞语言、口号语言”，而在于考生能否灵活运用一些基础词汇和固定表达，写出语法正确、语言流畅的文章。
4.技巧和能力并重：
北京新东方四
六级课堂所倡导的“写作技巧与范文背诵”作文备考思路依旧得到体现和应用。考生既要规律性总结历年真题出题的特点，又要勤加背诵和练习考前的范文。宗旨，多背，多写，背好，写好，总能够在考场上有话好说，有分可拿!
【参考范文】
I have met so many friends in my college life. They have exerted enormous influence on my life. However, one of my most impressive friends is my roommate, Li Ming. In the class meeting on the first day of school, Li Ming did not impress us at all. We started to notice him because he was always late for classes.
We were thus impressed by his laziness. I came to know him and his situation because we were roommates and spent much time together: his mother was seriously ill and sick abed in long-term, his father left him and his mother mercilessly. Hence, it was him that shouldered the heavy burden of taking care of his sick mothersupporting the whole family.Finally, under great pressures, he balanced his life and study perfectly: he was no longer always late, took good care of his mother and even won the scholarship many years in a row. The experience of Li Ming can be one of the most convincing cases of the power of persistence and will. He left a deep impression and imposed a durable influence on me.
Indeed, friend such as him can be regarded as asset and property in our life. We have rights to choose our own friends，but we should also be prudent and sensible enough to choose friends who can bring us “positive energy”. (228 words)
