2011年12月英语六级作文范文及评析(上海新东方版)

　　此次作文操作和以前一样，原因现象类文章，以前的老套路也能套上。但不同在于，考生必须事先看懂考卷中的文字，林肯的那一段话。“工欲善其事，必先利其器。”简言之，良好的准备是成功的基础。如果能在文中体现preparation和success这两个关键词，要点就基本体现完整了。

　　从上午四级到下午六级，我们可以明确的发现，作文写作方法用老的套路和步骤完全可行。第一段，表述成功和准备的重要性；第二段，分析原因第一、第二、第三；第三段，总结。但如果考生读不懂提纲所示，那么就麻烦了。

　　所以，重点是看懂题目，并且能把题目解释成一到两个简单的关键词。中文理解力很重要。能理解，行文就是模板。不能理解，模板就是废物。就这次作文来看，四六级作文在借用国际知名考试的出题模式。也再次验证了其科学性。

　　以下我们用新东方四级材料来说明文章的简单，和上午四级作文几乎一样，只需改动几个词就行。这篇文章是新东方四级写作10年来的材料，套用如常。不一定能获取高分，但能证明模板套用的可行性。

　　还是那句话，我们不猜题不压题，广大新东方学员学到的是不变应万变的应试写作方法。另外，作为国内权威的科学性较高的英语等级考试，它会更多的借用国际权威的英语考试出题模式。

　　Everyone tries to achieve success in his career. However, someone firmly attains his goal while another fails. Why? The one continues his cause to the end through long periods of hard struggling, but the other is easily disappointed or stops halfway。

　　Good preparation, perseverance and diligence are the three essentials of success. A man of solid preparation and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. He sticks to his cause no matter how tough it might be. Dr. Sun Yat-sen was such a man. Many of his attempts failed, but he held to his purpose with firmness and finally succeeded in overthrowing the Qing Dynasty. Diligence means steadiness in one’s work and study. Su Qin stabbed himself in order to keep himself attentive to studies. Marx often worked 15 hours a day. Life is short and we have many things to do. Without diligence no one can achieve anything。

　　I believe that where there is a preparation there is a way, and that success belongs to those who can suffer long years of patient toil and constant efforts。

　　(来源：上海新东方国内考试部 四六级教研组)