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英语写作四大难关怎么跨?各类话题一句搞定

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2016年12月31日

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  1.英语基本功

  在写作备考中要有计划地,再合理地把词汇量增加。多读范文,若考试时间更接近了,能够选择使用背诵范文的方法,虽然辛苦一点,但是还是有效的。曾经一位哲学家讲过这样一个故事,表示人的一生都会面对下面的5个名词:爱人、家庭、工作、健康、朋友 (lover, family, career, health, friend )。打个比方,若将这5个方面比喻成为五个球的话,而只有健康属于玻璃球,另外的4个全都是橡皮球,即使不小心弄掉了,还是会反弹回来,而健康却是一旦落地,满盘皆输,没有任何办法补救。听过这样的故事,你不但很容易弄懂其中的道理,这几个英文单词也不会离你远去了。

  2.中文式的翻译

  有些句子也许只有中国人才可以理解意思是什么,追究原因即是生硬地翻译了汉语表达方式。受汉语文化影响,我们博大精深的语言在大家的脑子里完全的扎根,而人的逻辑思维却十分的奇怪,只要大家每天的思维习惯已经养成,那么是难以在短期里进行改变。外国人逐渐的又崇拜汉文化,最初在学习我们的语言,孔子学院也应因而生,这对推广我们的文化是好的,但是托福考试是对英语的测试,只有26个字母。我见过很多有趣的中文式的翻译,比如把“黑社会”翻译成“black society”,还有把“八卦”说成“eight hang”的,等等。

  建议多听,当然是听英文。学语言的顺序必须是听说读写,听即是针对语境与语感一个好的提升,考生能够尽量的寻找一些英文的短片来欣赏,当学习英语的同时还能娱乐了自己,一举两得。

  3.套路化痕迹明显

  这里的套路,就是templates。大部分老师当授课过程里有意的写作套路突出,而学生同样用尽办法背诵写作套路,导致展现在阅卷官面前的作文框架甚至很多语句千篇一律、如出一辙,最后把分数影响了。模板固然有用,但对于first draft的观念,文章的亮点就看不到了。

  建议考生能够暂时把托福考试放下,从blog或者日记开始,每天都使用英文做托福写作练习,尽可能的将自己对社会的情绪和对学校的不满写出来,发泄出来。此练习会使大家的文章逐渐符合first draft的要求。

  4.通篇框架散乱

  此要求在练习里慢慢的提升。我们在写作之前,特别是对于task2,关键的工作即是构思。一般来说,在3-4分钟时间之内,大家要求有一个相对合理的构思与一个绝对稳定的结构,如果两者都做到了,整个文章的框架就自然很清晰了。

  通常考生出现文章框架混乱会有下面的原因:有些并未做完整的审题和构思练习,文章写的内容与结构都十分的凌乱;还有的是文章结构很好,但当大家构思时太过匆忙或者紧张,论证不够完整,举例也不合理。这些也是一般中国考生在考试中最常出现的问题。  

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  下面,小编就为大家整理了托福独立题目中常涉及到的概念并给出难易适度的定义。无论是开头(“天下大势”型)还是主体段落(“explanation”部分中的“下定义”工具)都能祭出这招,而且用的得当的话,效果非常不错,也可以有效填充文章内容。

  “科技”定义:

  Technology is the activity or study of using scientific knowledge for practical purposes in industry, farming, medicine, business, etc.

  可能用到的题目:

  Technology designed to make our life simpler actually makes our life more complicated.

  “电话”定义:

  The telephone is a technology of communication that makes it possible for people to talk directly to someone else in a different place.

  可能用到的题目:

  Telephone has had greater effects on people's lives than television.

  “电视”定义:

  Television, a communicative medium sending and receiving pictures and sounds by electrical signals, has become a traditional form of mass media and part of the modern culture.

  可能用到的题目:

  The purpose of television should be all educative, not entertaining.

  “电影”定义:

  Movies, moving pictures that can tell stories or show reality, have become a mainstream form of art and an important way of entertainment.

  可能用到的题目:

  Movies and TV have more negative effects than positive effects on the way young people behave.

  “电子书”定义:

  An electronic book refers to a book-length publication in digital form.

  可能用到的题目:

  In twenty years from now, students will not use printed books anymore.

  “旅行”定义:

  Travel means one’s moving from a familiar place to another or to several places.

  可能用到的题目:

  Which way is the best for students to make new friends: joining a sport team, participating in community activities, or travelling?

  “体育运动”定义:

  Sports are games such as football, tennis and other activities which need physical effort and skill.

  可能用到的题目:

  Sports can teach people important lessons on the understanding of life.

  “社会生活”定义:

  Social life consists of the activities in which people socialize, for example in their houses or at parties.

  可能用到的题目:

  It is more important for schools to fund their students’ social activities than to improve students’ meals.

  “社交技能”定义:

  Social skill is any skill facilitating interaction and communication with others.

  可能用到的题目:

  Students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities.

  “建议”定义:

  If people give you advice, they tell you what they think you should do in a particular situation.

  可能用到的题目:

  Getting advice from people who are older than you is more valuable than from people of your age.

  “政府”定义:

  A government is the group of people who are responsible for governing a country for a particular time.

  可能用到的题目:

  People can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so there's no need for the government to help them.

  “教育”定义:

  Education is a form of learning in which the knowledge, skills, and habits of a group of people are transferred from one generation to the next through teaching, training, or research.

  可能用到的题目:

  Improving schools is the most important factor in the successful development of a country.

  “大学”定义:

  A university is an institution where students study for degrees and where academic research is done.

  可能用到的题目:

  For the successful development of a county, a government should focus its budget more on the education of very young children (5—10 years old) rather than on university.

  “教授”定义:

  A professor is a scholarly teacher whose duty consists of both teaching and doing research.

  可能用到的题目:

  It is more important for professor to teach students than to do researches.

  “艺术”和“艺术家”定义:

  Art is the creation and production of paintings, drawings, sculptures, etc., when these things are considered to be beautiful or to express in a unique way a particular idea or meaning.

  Artists are people who create and produce works of art as their jobs or hobbies.

  可能用到的题目:

  The government should support artists rather than let them support themselves.

  “经济”定义:

  版本一:An economy is the system according to which the money, industry, and trade of a country or region are organized.

  版本二:A country’s economy is the wealth that it gets from business and industry.

  可能用到的题目:

  Governments should focus more on preservation of environment rather than economic development.

  “医疗”定义:

  Health care is the diagnosis, treatment, and prevention of disease, illness, injury, etc. in humans.

  可能用到的题目:

  When in times of economy crisis, government should spend less money on which part? Education, Health Care or support for unemployed?

  “音乐”定义:

  Music consists of sounds that are put together in a pattern and performed by people either using instruments or singing in order to give them pleasure.

  可能用到的题目:

  Young children (aged 5-10) should be required to learn music and art in addition to math, science, history and language.

  “工作”定义:

  A job is an activity one does regularly for payment.

  可能用到的题目:

  A secure job with lower pay is better than a job with higher pay but easy to lose.

  “社会”定义:

  版本一:A society is the people who live in a country or region, their organizations, and their way of life.

  版本二:Society is people in general, thought of as a large organized group.

  可能用到的题目:

  The most important problems affecting our society today could be solved within our lifetime.

  “文化”定义:

  Culture consists of the ideas, customs, and art that are produced or shared by a particular society.

  可能用到的题目:

  Movies and TV programs produced in our own country are more interesting than foreign ones.

  “环境”定义:

  The environment is the natural surroundings in which people live.

  可能用到的题目:

  Environmental issues are too complex for individuals to deal with.

  “乐观”定义:

  Optimism is the feeling of being hopeful about the future and the belief that a particular situation or course of action will be successful.

  可能用到的题目:

  Do you think success is important, or it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when you fail?

  “耐心”定义:

  Patience is one’s ability to control his/her feelings so that he/she does not get annoyed, even in situations which other people would find annoying or frustrating.

  可能用到的题目:

  Patience is usually not a good strategy. We should take action now rather than later.

  “交流”定义:

  Communication is the activity or process of giving information to other people, using signals such as speech, body movements, or online messages.

  可能用到的题目:

  Communication skill is the most important characteristic of successful leadership.

  “公司”定义:

  A company is a business organization that exists in order to make money by selling goods or services.

  可能用到的题目:

  Businesses should hire their employees for their entire life.

  “广告”定义:

  Advertising is the activities of showing products, events or jobs in public in order to encourage people to buy the products, go to the events, or apply for the jobs.

  可能用到的题目:

  In order to succeed, a company should invest a great amount of money in advertising.

  “父母”定义:

  Our parents are people who give us life, parenting and upbringing.

  可能用到的题目:

  Parents spend too much time in deciding what their children do in the future; children should make their own choices.

  “家庭教育”定义:

  Family education is the first education one receives, and in large part determines his/her characters and capabilities.

  可能用到的题目:

  Parents today are more involved in their children’s education than in the past.

  “博物馆”定义:

  A museum is a building where a large number of interesting and valuable objects, such as works of art or historical items, are kept, studied, and displayed to the public.

  可能用到的题目:

  Visiting museums is the best way to learn about a country.

  “宠物”定义:

  A pet is an animal that you keep in your home to give you company and pleasure.

  可能用到的题目:

  The best way to teach a child responsibility is to let him/her keep an animal.

  关于这些句子的使用方法,还要补充说明一下:

  假如能完整记忆下所有句子,自然是最理想状态,但是也不用非得费劲这么做。

  第一,可以结合托福机经,有针对性地在考前挑选组合特定的一些概念来记;第二,很多定义我们只需读熟,对定义的内容有所了解,能够写出大致含义,并不要求一字不差地背会所有句子。托福作文中的下定义,并不要求像词典那么准确,不用担心。
 


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