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托福写作的模板结构解析

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2018年12月10日

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  托福作文的结构布局,对于我们最终的得分,也是一定的影响。通常很多同学们也会背诵一些写作模板,因此今天我们就从模板入手,来详细的分析一下托福作文整体的结构布局。

  1、开头

  Sample one(适用于有一些背景or有一个中心词而且编得出来那个quotation的所有情况(二选一,agree or disagree,除了个别);

  On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(与科技有关的背景),XX(中心词) serves as a catalyst for our future success/ XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./很简单的一句背景 , However, people (universities, government, citizen, society, government,) are/is invariably faced with such a question/ can’t help wondering:改写题目1.Confucian (Yu Qiuyu, Mark Twain, William Shakespeare), (one of) the greatest and most influential Chinese philosophers (scholars, educators, writers, thinkers, statesmen), has insightfully commented, “___编____”I cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment gives the answer to this question:改写题目2.

  Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾,且如果字数够了这一句就不要).

  要做的:想一句简单的背景+编一句名言+改写两次题目

  Sample two:(如果sample one的名言编不出来或者不适合编如leisure time,就用下面的)

  On contemporary society(一般的背景)/ With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information explosive era(与科技有关的背景))/ On account of …,XX(中心词) serves as a catalyst for our future success/ XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important role in… /XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./ 很简单的一句背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also). However,when it comes to the choice between AA and BB/When asked about whether改写题目1, people get into a dilemma. According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my perspective, I cling to an unshakeable belief that改写题目2.以下最后决定怎样写:Among countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾)/AA not only…but also(2)/There are various merits AA brings about, first of all, to…; secondly, to…;and lastly…(3).

  要做的:想一句简单的背景+改写两次题目+总起(最后写)

  2、分点一:分层论证

  Basic to any understanding of the benefits we can get from

  _______ is that__________/ First and foremost,

  On one hand_________, On the other hand_________

  Besides/ What’s more/ In addition.

  这一段主要说理,在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节,重点是要用一些精华句子!

  3、分点二:举例论证

  Further lending credence to my position is that____________

  (简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话)I can think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子)/ A case in point is that(不是很典型)________,…..(例子见后面)

  一句话总结例子:As a result,强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样

  4、让步段:

  Agree or disagree: Admittedly,_____,to some extent, may directly or indirectly ____ /has its undeniable detriments. For instance, _______

  However, the valuable merits of_______ considerably overshadow the drawbacks/ on no account________./

  二选一:Admittedly, BB also has certain merits which deserve some words here. For example, ____(字数不够就多讲点) However,BB 的缺点或AA也可以做到. Compared with AA, (which 可以总结所有优点或针对BB的一方面, )it pales.

  5、结尾段:

  Therefore, due to the above mentioned reasons, which sometimes correlate with each other to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive than any single one of them(字不够了用), I reinforce my stand point that 改写题目3

  Only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we__________;

  only via(by/through /with/when/after) ___can we________;

  and only via(by/through /with/when/after)___can we_______

  Or It is A that...;it is A that...;and it is A that...(不好写或显得累赘就不要了)


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