六级高分作文_关于昨天、今天和明天

　关于昨天、今天和明天

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow .” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your past, present and future days trustworthy . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

审题立意

1. 导语解读：要求考生就题目中给定的话语“借鉴昨天，活在今天，憧憬明天”进行简评，引出“如何把握自己的过去、现在和将来”这一话题并进行论述。

2. 文章立意：我们的一生浓缩为昨天、今天和明天。三者紧密相连，密不可分。因此，要借鉴昨天，活在今天，憧憬明天，把握好自己的过去、现在和将来。

写作思路

1. 第一段简要描述给定的话语“借鉴昨天，活在今天，憧憬明天”，然后提出论点：我们应把握好自己的过去、现在和将来。

2. 第二段承上启下，通过疑问的方式提出如何做到把握好自己的过去、现在和将来。

3. 第三段通过“总—分—总”的方式分层论述了如何把握好自己的过去、现在和将来。

参考范文

“Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.” The remark means that every day is closely related to another, for yesterday leaves us valuable experience that we can take advantage of for today and tomorrow; today is the time that we learn from yesterday and experience new life, making good preparations for tomorrow; tomorrow is the future that we are eager to experience based on yesterday and today. It informs us that we should make our past, present and future days worthwhile. 1

What will we do to make it so? 2

From my own perspective, seize every day. 3 Yesterday is a foundation. You may say yesterday is history, but if you seize it, there’s no regret and you lay solid foundation for future days. 4 Today is action. You may say today is too short but that is the reality. If you seize today, you’ll have done what you should do and make progress, going close to success. 4 Tomorrow is a plan. You may say tomorrow is changeable but it is mysterious, full of hope. Although we don’t know what will happen tomorrow, we can make good preparations for greater success. 4 Seize every day and you’ll make the past, present and future days worthwhile. 5

“借鉴昨天，活在今天，憧憬明天。”这句话是说，每天都紧密相连，因为昨天留下的是我们可用于今天和明天的宝贵经验；今天是我们借鉴昨天、体验新生活的时间，并为明天做好准备；明天是建立在昨天和今天之上，我们渴望去体验的将来时间。这启示我们应该把握好过去、现在和将来。

如何把握好过去、现在和将来？

我个人的观点是：抓住每一天。昨天是基础。你也许会说，昨天已成历史，但是你若抓住了昨天，就不会有遗憾，也就为将来奠定了坚实的基础。今天是行动。你或许会说今天太短暂了，但它却是现实。如果你抓住了今天，你就完成了应该做的事情并取得进步，逐步走向成功。明天是计划。你或许会说，明天变化无常但它却是神秘的，充满了希望。尽管我们不知道明天会发生什么，但我们可以做好准备，争取更大的成功。抓住每一天，你就把握了过去、现在和将来。

范文点评

1. 开篇简要描述话语的含义，同时结合话语的含义引出文章的论点：应把握好自己的过去、现在和将来。

2. 自然过渡，用疑问的方式提出如何把握好自己的过去、现在和将来，紧扣作文话题。

3. 第三段首句提纲挈领，明确说明“抓住每一天”就会把握好自己的过去、现在和将来。

4. 分三个层次论证了自己的观点，论据充分，论证有力。

5. 末句总结全文，再次强调了论点。

要点用法

be related to 和……相关

take advantage of 利用

make good preparations for 为……做好准备

trustworthy adj. 可信赖的；可靠的

foundation n. 基础

changeable adj. 多变的

mysterious adj. 神秘的

句法点评

1. The remark means that every day is closely related to another, for yesterday leaves us valuable experience that we can take advantage of for today and tomorrow; today is the time that we learn from yesterday and experience new life, making good preparations for tomorrow; tomorrow is the future that we are eager to experience based on yesterday and today.

本句是一个较复杂的句子，that引导的从句有宾语从句that every day is closely related to another，有定语从句that we can take advantage of for today and tomorrow和that we are eager to experience. 也有同位语从句that we learn from yesterday and experience new life，同时还用到了现在分词短语making good preparations和过去分词短语based on yesterday and today，句式结构复杂多样。

2. Seize every day and you’ll make the past, present and future days worthwhile.

本句为“祈使句+ and +陈述句”的结构，其中的祈使句的功能相当于条件状语从句，如本句可以转化为If you seize every day, you’ll make the past, present and future days worthwhile。