六级高分作文_如何面对错误?

　如何面对错误?

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on facing mistakes properly by commenting on the remark, “You can learn great things from your mistakes when you aren’t busy denying them .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

审题立意

1. 导语解读：要求考生根据题目的要求，从评论“当你不急于否认错误时，就会从错误中学到好东西”入手，就“如何正确面对错误”这一话题进行论述。

2. 文章立意：人无完人，任何人都会犯错误。人们对待错误的方式不尽相同，应正确对待错误。

写作思路

1. 第一段简要解释谚语的含义并提出问题：应如何正确面对错误？

2. 第二段用列举法论证，正确对待错误首先要承认错误：不要怨天尤人，也不要自怨自艾；承认错误就是扫清前进道路上的障碍，知道错误在哪，便于更好地纠正错误，争取成功。

3. 第三段从另一方面论证如何正确对待错误：向专家请教，获取宝贵建议。

参考范文

“You can learn great things from your mistakes when you aren’t busy denying them.” It’s true that to err is human. If we don’t deny mistakes, we can learn a lot from them. 1 However, many people are afraid of mistakes. How can we face mistakes properly? 2

The first step 3 is acknowledging the mistake that you have made.Admit that you have done something wrong rather than blame everyone and everything but yourself for a setback. Of course, you don’t need to condemn yourself as a failure. Understanding your mistake is to clear your way to progress because you can learn some lessons from the mistake. Acknowledging your mistake is to reflect on how you made the mistake so as to make it more likely for you to correct yourself and succeed the next time.

Another way 3 to face your mistakes properly is to ask for advice from an expert who is wise, trustworthy, and willing to listen to your explanations of what you’ve tried so far. If you have all ears to the advice, you’ll gain many valuable insights.

“当你不急于否认错误时，就会从错误中学到好东西。”的确，人非圣贤，孰能无过。如果我们不否认错误，我们就会从中学到很多。然而，很多人害怕错误。如何正确面对错误呢？

第一步就是承认你所犯的错误。宁可承认你做错了也不要怨天尤人。当然，你也不用责备自己是个失败者。认识错误能为你扫清进步道路上的障碍，因为你可以从错误中吸取教训。承认错误就是要反思你是如何犯下错误的，以便你更有可能调整自己并在下次取得成功。

另一种正确面对错误的方法就是向睿智且值得信赖的专家请教，这位专家愿意听你解释到目前为止你已经付出了哪些努力。如果你对这些忠告洗耳恭听，你会获得很多有价值的深刻见解。

范文点评

1. 开篇引入引言并简要评述。

2. 话锋一转，指出许多人害怕错误，然后自然过渡，用疑问句的方式引出本文要探讨的问题：如何正确面对错误。

3. 分层论证，从两个方面论证正确面对错误的方式。

要点用法

To err is human. 人非圣贤，孰能无过

blame everyone and everything but oneself 怨天尤人

condemn v. 谴责

clear one’s way 扫清某人的道路

reflect on 反省；深思

trustworthy adj. 可靠的；可信赖的

have all ears 洗耳恭听

insight n. 深刻见解；洞察力

句法点评

1. Understanding your mistake is to clear your way to progress because you can learn some lessons from the mistake.

本句是复杂句，包含了because引导的原因状语从句。除此之外，本句还用到了动名词，在句中作主语，使句式变化多样。

2. Another way to face your mistakes properly is to ask for advice from an expert who is wise, trustworthy, and willing to listen to your explanations of what you’ve tried so far.

本句也是复杂句，包含了who引导的定语从句who is wise, trustworthy...so far，该定语从句中使用了what引导的宾语从句，作介词of的宾语，使得句式结构变化多样，行文流畅。