六级高分作文_珍惜每一刻
珍惜每一刻
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on treasuring every moment by commenting on the remark, “Every single thing that has ever happened in your life is preparing you for a moment that is yet to come .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据题目的要求，从评论“生活中发生的每一件事都是在为你的未来做准备”入手，就“珍惜每一刻”这一话题展开论述。
2. 文章立意：时间是宝贵的，应珍惜每一刻。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要就题目中给定的话语做出评论，引出论点：应该珍惜每一刻。
2. 第二段用人们熟知的说法“时间就是金钱”来论证珍惜时间的重要性：时不我待，金钱难买。
3. 第三段采用人们熟知的说法“时间就是生命”来论证珍惜时间的重要性：浪费时间就等于浪费生命。
4. 第四段总结二、三段的分论点，再次突出珍惜每一刻的重要性。
参考范文
“Every single thing that has ever happened in your life is preparing you for a moment that is yet to come.” This remark tells us that we should treasure every minute and do something meaningful. 1
Time is money. 2 Time flies and never waits for anyone. We cannot reclaim time once it passes by no matter how much money you have. For this reason, time is even more precious than money. When money is spent, we can earn more. However, when time is gone, it will never return. This is the reason why we must value time.
Time is life. 2 As we all know, life is limited and every minute is extremely precious for us. However, if one kills time, such as doing nothing all day or spending much time playing computer games, he will be good for nothing. In this sense, wasting time is equal to wasting a part of one’s valuable life. On the contrary, if one makes full use of every minute to do something meaningful, he will make a great achievement over a long period of time.
Money and life are two of the most important things for us. Therefore, treasure every moment you have. Seize the time, seize the day! 3
“生活中发生的每一件事都是在为你的未来做准备。”这句话告诉我们，要珍惜每时每刻，做有意义的事情。
时间就是金钱。时间如流水，岁月不待人。一旦时间流走，即使有再多的钱我们也买不回来。因此，时间要比金钱更加宝贵。钱花了，我们可以再挣。然而，时间没了就再也回不来了。这就是我们为什么要珍惜时间的原因。
时间就是生命。众所周知，生命是有限的，对于我们来说，每一秒都异常珍贵。然而，如果一个人消磨时间，比如成天什么事都不做或者花大量的时间玩电脑游戏，他将一事无成。从这种意义上讲，浪费时间就等于浪费一个人宝贵生命的一部分。相反，如果一个人争分夺秒地做有意义的事，经过较长的一段时间他就可以获得重大的成就。
金钱和生命对我们来说是两项最重要的东西。因此，珍惜每时每刻，抓紧时间，抓紧每一天。
范文点评
1. 开篇简要解释题目中话语的含义，引出论点，紧扣作文话题。
2. 分两个层次论证自己的观点：时间就是金钱；时间就是生命。层次清晰，论证有力。
3. 末段总结全文，并再次指出我们应该珍惜每一刻，呼应主题。
要点用法
precious adj. 宝贵的；珍贵的
kill time 消磨时光
be good for nothing 一无是处
on the contrary 相反
make full use of every minute 争分夺秒
句法点评
1. However, if one kills time, such as doing nothing all day or spending much time playing computer games, he will be good for nothing.
此句中用到了such as这一介词短语，因此后面接动名词短语doing nothing all day or spending much time...。such as表示列举，意为“例如……”。
2. In this sense, wasting time is equal to wasting a part of one’s valuable life.
本句采用的是动名词短语wasting time作主语，而句中的动名词短语wasting a part of one’s valuable life作介词to的宾语。
