六级高分作文_今日事今日毕
今日事今日毕
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Never to Delay by commenting on the saying, “Never put off what you can do today until tomorrow .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生从评论“今日事今日毕”这一引言入手，写一篇题目为《绝不拖延》的作文。
2. 文章立意：人们每天都有要做的事情，如果拖延，好多重要的事情会被拖得无法如期完成。因此，拖延往往会让一个人停止前进的脚步。今日事今日毕是人们取得更大成就的保障之一。
写作思路
1. 第一段结合谚语引出“绝不拖延”这一话题。
2. 第二段论述拖延的惯性、危害性。
3. 第三段表明自己的观点，再次强调不要拖延。
参考范文
Never to Delay
Since our childhood, we have been told never to delay, just as the saying goes, “Never put off what you can do today until tomorrow.” 1
Frankly speaking, in our daily life many people tend to refuse to do things immediately owing to their indolence. Whether the thing is easy or not, they would rather enjoy their free time instead of going at it. Therefore, there are many people who like to put off things they should do today until tomorrow. As they are always behind schedule, there will be more and more things for them to address with each passing day. Faced with great pressure to fix all of them at a time, they usually can’t accomplish their goals in the end. 2
I agree that we should never put off what we can do today until tomorrow. 3 We should work hard today for we don’t know what will happen and how much we may be hindered tomorrow. Maybe there will be more important things to do. So seize the present and don’t make excuses to put off until tomorrow what we are supposed to do today. 4
绝不拖延
我们从小就被告知绝不要拖延，正如谚语所说：“今日事今日毕。”
坦率地说，在日常生活中，因为懒惰，许多人往往不愿意即刻做事。不管容易还是困难，他们宁愿享受着悠闲而不是着手去做。因此，有很多人就喜欢把今天应该做的事推到明天去做。由于他们总是落后于预定计划，日复一日，他们每天都会有越来越多的事需要处理。面临着一次要处理所有事情的巨大压力，他们通常无法最终完成目标。
绝不把今天能做的事推到明天，我同意这种说法。我们就应该今天努力去做，因为我们不知道明天会发生什么或者明天我们会遇到什么阻碍。也许明天会有更重要的事。所以，要抓住当下，不要找任何借口推脱今天该做的事。
范文点评
1. 开篇结合谚语引出话题：绝不要拖延。
2. 从日常生活着手，论述拖延对人们生活的不良影响，解释不应拖延的原因。
3. 末段首句明确表达自己的态度：赞同不应拖延的观点。
4. 重申观点，再次强调不要拖延。
要点用法
frankly speaking 坦率地说
indolence n. 懒惰
behind schedule 落后于预定计划
in the end 最终，最后；终于
hinder v. 阻碍
be supposed to do sth. 应当做某事
句法点评
1. As they are always behind schedule, there will be more and more things for them to address with each passing day.
在英文中，“处理”问题或事情可以用多个动词来表示，本句用了address一词，文中还出现了do, go at it和fix。要注意使用同义词或近义词来表达相同的意思，力求表达方式丰富多样。
2. Faced with great pressure to fix all of them at a time, they usually can’t accomplish their goals in the end.
本句采用了faced with...这一过去分词短语，在此处表示原因。过去分词（短语）、现在分词（短语）等非谓语的使用，会使英文句子显得更加紧凑。
