六级高分作文_经验的重要性

　经验的重要性

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Experience without learning is better than learning without experience .” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to make yourself more experienced . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

审题立意

1. 导语解读：要求考生根据给定的话语就“经验和学习的关系”这一话题展开论述，阐明经验的重要性。

2. 文章立意：经验从学习中得来，但没有经验的学习只是一纸空文，没什么意义。因此，经验很重要。

写作思路

1. 第一段简要解释给定话语的含义，然后提出论点：经验很重要。

2. 第二段通过成功人士的做法说明经验的重要性，同时提出如何使自己更具有经验。

3. 第三段以大学生为例论述使自己经验丰富的方法。

参考范文

“Experience without learning is better than learning without experience.” The saying means that experience is of vital importance and one can have only learning with no experience. It stresses the importance of experience. 1

I totally agree with that. 2 Successful people are willing to learn from their experience immediately. They know that failure is the mother of success. Whenever they fail, after introspecting for a while, they can learn a lot from their experience. Doing this, they can know the mistakes and make some changes. Then they will start again and continue struggling for success. They do know the importance of experience. So what can you do to make yourself more experienced? 3

For my part, it is worthwhile for senior university students to spend some time acquiring experience in vocational and volunteer activities, which will provide us with the necessary workplace skills and experience, boost our appeal in the eyes of employers because the activities can build our strength of character and reveal an innate desire to work. There’s no doubt that we’ll be afforded a unique edge over the majority of our contemporaries. 4

“有经验而无学问胜于有学问而无经验。”这句话的意思是，经验是至关重要的，如果不实践，人只能空有知识。它强调了经验的重要性。

我完全同意这种看法。成功人士愿意及时吸取经验。他们懂得失败乃成功之母。每当他们失败时，短时间反省之后，他们都能从失败的经验中汲取很多教训。这样，他们就能了解自己的错误并做出一些改变，然后重振旗鼓，继续为成功而斗争。他们的确懂得经验的重要性，那么做些什么才能丰富你的经验呢？

对我来说，大学的高年级学生花费一些时间从求职和志愿者活动中获取经验是值得的，这会为我们提供必要的职场技能与经验，提升我们在雇主眼中的吸引力，因为这些活动能塑造我们坚强的品格并展示一种内在的工作欲望。毋庸置疑，我们会超越大多数同龄人而获得一种独特的优势。

范文点评

1. 开篇简要解释给定话语的含义，同时结合话语含义给出其要说明的观点：经验的重要性。

2. 第二段首句明确表达自己的观点：赞同经验很重要。

3. 以成功人士的经验为例，论述经验的重要性。

4. 以大学生为例，论述如何让自己经验丰富，并提供切实可行的做法。

要点用法

be willing to do 乐意做

introspect v. 反省，内省

worthwhile adj. 值得的

vocational adj. 职业的

workplace n. 工作场所

boost v. 促进；增加

appeal n. 吸引力；感染力

innate adj. 内在的；固有的；先天的

unique edge 独特的优势

contemporary n. 同时代的人

句法点评

1. They do know the importance of experience.

此句中用了“do+动词原形”表示强调的结构，增加了句式的多样性。

2. For my part, it is worthwhile for senior university students to spend some time acquiring experience in vocational and volunteer activities, which will provide us with the necessary workplace skills and experience, boost our appeal in the eyes of employers because the activities can build our strength of character and reveal an innate desire to work.