六级高分作文_关于学校和生活的区别
关于学校和生活的区别
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the distinction between school and life by referring to the saying “The difference between school and life? In school, you’re taught a lesson and then given a test. In life, you are given a test that teaches you a lesson .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据 “学校和生活有何区别? 在学校，先上课，后测试；生活中，先经受考验，而后得到教训。”这句名言，写一篇关于“学校和生活的区别”的作文，可以举例说明。
2. 文章立意：学校和生活是不同的，相比之下，学校是宽容的，生活是苛刻的。但是正因为这些不同，学校时光才让人如此怀念，我们的人生才变得如此多彩。
写作思路
1. 开篇段落引入名言，指出学校是宽容的，生活是苛刻的。
2. 主体段落深入分析为什么学校和生活有如此大的差别。
3. 结尾段落总结全文，提出自己的观点。
参考范文
There is a saying that goes “The difference between school and life? In school, you’re taught a lesson and then given a test. In life, you are given a test that teaches you a lesson.” That is right. School is tolerant but life is harsh. 1
In school, you are a student and your main task is to learn and acquire knowledge. Giving tests is just a measure to see whether you have mastered the knowledge or not. If not, you can make up for it. This method is moderate, and so school is tolerant. 2
Compared to school, life is com-plicated. You are tested on all kinds of abilities, such as viability, sociability, learning ability, capacity for work, etc. There is no rehearsal in life. Every day is a live show. If you succeed, you will harvest joy. If you fail, you will be taught a lesson. So, life is harsh. 2
But because of these differences, school time is so memorable and our life becomes so colorful. So, please cherish school time and don’t let it slip idly by; please face life bravely as it is wonderful whether we lose or win. 3
有这样一句名言“学校和生活有何区别？在学校，先上课，后测试；生活中，先经受考验，而后得到教训。”是的，学校是宽容的，生活是苛刻的。
在学校，你是一名学生，你的主要任务是学习并获得知识，测试只是一种手段，看看你对所学知识是否已经掌握。如果没有掌握查漏补缺即可，这种方式是温和的，因此学校是宽容的。
相对于学校，生活是复杂的。生活要检验你的各种能力，如生存能力、社交能力、学习能力、工作能力等。生活没有彩排，每天都是现场直播。成功了收获喜悦，失败了收获教训。因此生活是苛刻的。
但是因为这些不同，学校时光才让人如此怀念，我们的生活才变得如此多彩。那么，请珍惜我们的校园时光，莫让它虚度；请勇敢地面对我们的生活，输赢都很精彩。
范文点评
1. 首句开门见山，直接引入名人名言，提炼出这句名言所要表达的观点，进而引出本文的话题，即学校和生活的区别。
2. 分两个层次深入分析为什么学校和生活有如此大的差别。
3. 文章没有止步于表面，末段对主题作进一步深化和总结，提出了自己的观点。
要点用法
tolerant adj. 宽容的
harsh adj. 苛刻的
make up for 补偿，弥补
moderate adj. 温和的
viability n. 生存能力
sociability n. 社交能力
rehearsal n. 彩排
memorable adj. 难忘的
let...slip idly by 让……虚度
句法点评
1. Giving tests is just a measure to see whether you have mastered the knowledge or not.
if和whether都可以引导宾语从句，但是句中有or not存在的时候只能用whether，不能用if。
2. So, please cherish school time and don’t let it slip idly by; please face life bravely as it is wonderful whether we lose or win.
本句使用了whether...or...的结构，意为“无论，不管……还是……”
