六级高分作文_令他人快乐，自己才会获得快乐
令他人快乐，自己才会获得快乐
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on being happy by referring to the saying “In order to make ourselves happy, we should learn how to make others happy first .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据 “为了让我们自己快乐，要先学会如何让他人快乐”这句话，写一篇关于“快乐”的文章，可以举例说明。
2. 文章立意：首先，赠人玫瑰，手有余香。在给予他人快乐的时候，自己也会得到快乐。其次，一个人快乐，不如与大家一起快乐。再次，好心情是可以互相影响的，当他人快乐的时候，这种快乐情绪会影响到自己，使自己也变得快乐起来。让我们努力做一个能给他人带来快乐的人，因为，使他人快乐就是使自己快乐。
写作思路
1. 第一段引用名言，直接点明主题。
2. 第二段通过理论和实例对主题进行论证。
3. 第三段呼应主题，以总结性的话语为文章画上句号。
参考范文
Everybody wants to be happy, but how can people achieve happiness? The saying teaches us a good method, “In order to make ourselves happy, we should learn how to make others happy first.” 1
Why do we say so? To begin with 2 , while you give others happiness, you can get happiness yourself, which is an eternally immutable life philosophy. Next 2 , being happy together is better than being happy alone. Isn’t there a question in Mencius: “Which is more pleasant—to enjoy music alone, or to enjoy it with others?” The ancients knew the reason. So modern people should understand it even better. Finally 2 , good mood is infectious. While others feel happy, the good mood will affect you and make you happy. For example, if we smile to people we meet every morning, they will smile back. We will have a good mood the whole day.
Let’s try our best to be people who can bring others happiness for making others happy is making ourselves happy. 3
每个人都希望快乐，但是如何获得快乐呢？有句名言告诉了我们一个好方法，那就是“为了让我们自己快乐，要先学会如何让他人快乐”。
为什么这么说呢？首先，在给予他人快乐的时候，自己也会得到快乐，这是亘古不变的人生哲理。其次，一个人快乐，不如与大家一起快乐。《孟子》一书中不是有“独乐乐，与人乐乐，孰乐乎？”的问法吗？古人尚且知道的道理，我们现代人更应该明白。最后，好心情是可以互相影响的，当他人快乐的时候，这种好心情会影响到自己，使自己也变得快乐起来。例如，如果每天早晨我们向遇到的人微笑，我们就会收获他们回报的笑容。这样我们整天都会拥有快乐的心情。
让我们努力做一个能给他人带来快乐的人吧，因为，使他人快乐就是使自己快乐。
范文点评
1. 开篇引用名言，点明主题。
2. 从三个角度，理论联系实例对主题进行论证。
3. 尾段通过一句总结语，“使他人快乐就是使自己快乐”，深化了主题。
要点用法
eternally adv. 永恒地
immutable adj. 不变的
Mencius n. 《孟子》
infectious adj. 传染的；传染性的
句法点评
1. To begin with, while you give others happiness, you can get happiness yourself, which is an eternally immutable life philosophy.
此句是一个复合句，while引导时间状语从句，主句为you can...，该复合句中还包含一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句。
2. Let’s try our best to be people who can bring others happiness for making others happy is making ourselves happy.
此句也是复合句，for引导原因状语，主句为let引导的祈使句，主句中包含who引导的限制性定语从句，修饰先行词people。
