六级高分作文_谨慎利弊谈

　谨慎利弊谈

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the advantages and disadvantages of being cautious by referring to the saying “The policy of being too cautious is the greatest risk of all .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain what is the best policy for making right decisions . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

审题立意

1. 导语解读：要求考生根据 “过度谨慎危害最大”这句话，写一篇文章，可以举例说明。

2. 文章立意：谨慎，从一方面来说，能帮助我们避免因冲动作出错误决定而造成损失。但从另一方面来说，过度的谨慎也会使我们错失一些良机。在今天这个高速发展的社会，机会稍纵即逝，只有那些敢于决断的人才能把握住机会，获得成功。

写作思路

1. 第一段指出任何事物都有两面性，并围绕着事物的两面性来对比说明谨慎的利弊。

2. 第二段通过一个小故事举例说明过度谨慎的危害。

3. 第三段深化主题，提出做决定的正确方法，即“敢于决断”。

参考范文

Every coin has two sides. 1 There is no exception to cautiousness. 2 Cautiousness, on one hand, can help us avoid losses brought about by impulsive decisions. On the other hand, too much cautiousness may cost us good opportunities. 3 Therefore, it is believed by some that “The policy of being too cautious is the greatest risk of all.” 4

A young man loves his job very much, but after a few years of working, he has a thought of starting a business because of his dissatisfaction with all kinds of restrictions in his job. However, since he had the thought of establishing a business, ten years have passed and he still works in the company. Why? Because each time he tried, he felt that it was not the right time, for example, insufficient funds, sluggish economy, the birth of children... 5 This story told us that being too cautious and being afraid of trying something new may cause serious damage to our achievements. 6

In today’s fast-developing society, opportunities can be fleeting. Only those who dare to make decisions can grasp the opportunities and achieve success. 7

任何事情都有两面性，谨慎也不例外。谨慎，从一方面来说，能帮助我们避免因冲动作出错误决定而造成损失。但从另一方面来说，过度的谨慎也会使我们错失良机。因而有人相信，过度谨慎危害最大。

有个年轻人很喜欢他的工作，但是工作几年后，他对于工作上的种种限制愈发不满，因而想创业。然而，自从他有创业的想法以来，10年过去了，他依然在原来的公司上班。为什么呢？因为他每次试图创业时，总是感觉时机不成熟。例如，资金不足，经济不景气，新婴儿的诞生……这个故事告诉我们，过于慎重而不敢尝试新的事物，会对我们的成就造成严重的伤害。

在今天这个高速发展的社会，机会稍纵即逝，只有那些敢于决断的人才能把握住机会，获得成功。

范文点评

1. 开篇用一句成语引入，从正反两面进行分析说明。

2. 通过该句，自然过渡到谨慎利弊谈。

3. 通过正反说明谨慎利弊，对二者进行了对比。

4. 引用名言作第一段结尾，同时也点明了文章论点。

5. 文章主题段通过一个小故事举例说明过度谨慎的危害。

6. 点明小故事的寓意，进一步强化了实例对主题的论证。

7. 将整篇文章主题凝缩，通过一句话加以总结，同时解答了做决定的正确方法。

要点用法

cautiousness n. 谨慎；小心

avoid v. 避免；躲避

bring about 引起；导致

impulsive adj. 冲动的；受感情驱使的

sluggish adj. 萧条的

achievement n. 成就

fleeting adj. 稍纵即逝的

句法点评

1. Every coin has two sides.

这是一句英语成语，表示“凡事都有两面性”。

2. Only those who dare to make decisions can grasp the opportunities and achieve success.