六级高分作文_头脑风暴

　头脑风暴

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture, explain its intended meaning and then illustrate how we can make the most of brainstorm . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

审题立意

1. 导语解读：要求考生根据漫画内容就“头脑风暴”这一话题进行描述，并说明如何充分利用头脑风暴。

2. 漫画解读：图片上画了一位男士和一位女士在聊天，男士头发呈云状，以突出主题“头脑风暴”。由下面注解文字可知，男士在向女士抱怨头脑风暴的利弊。正如抱怨的男士所言，头脑风暴有时候会起到集思广益的作用，碰撞出很多思想火花，但在另外一些情况下，头脑风暴又会搅乱思绪，令所讨论的问题更加模糊不清。

3. 文章立意：头脑风暴是一种创意思维，只有合理利用，才能产生良好的效果。

写作思路

1. 第一段简要描述漫画及注解文字，然后提出论点：只要条件合适，创造性思维就会得到发展、完善，从酝酿直至成熟。

2. 第二段分三个层次解释说明如何合理运用头脑风暴。

3. 第三段重申主题，指明合理运用头脑风暴对社会发展有益。

参考范文

As can be seen in the picture, a woman got confused by a man’s funny hairstyle, which looks like a mass of cloud and the caption under the picture says, “Some days you get a brainstorm, but other days you just get the clouds.” It conveys the message that collision of minds sometimes brings some really creative thinking, but sometimes leads the mind into total chaos. Despite its negative effect, brainstorming can generate fruitful results if applied properly. 1

Firstly 2 , brainstorming should be treated with correct attitude. Brainstorming is not something fantastic; it is in fact something interesting and meaningful. Furthermore 2 , brainstorming is not a thinking confined to one person. Just as an old saying goes, “Two heads are better than one”. 3 Collective force can strengthen the performance of a brainstorm. Besides 2 , brainstorm requires organizing, analyzing, investigating and selecting. Those practical ideas should be singled out to be delved into deeply until a good plan takes shape while those unpractical ideas should be excluded.

To sum up, if utilized appropriately, brainstorming can be beneficial to social development. 4

如图所示，女士对男士看上去像一团云的滑稽发型感到困惑。图片下面的文字写道：“有些时候你收获的是头脑风暴后产生的好主意，而有些时候头脑风暴却使你云里雾里，不知所措。”这幅图传达了这样的信息：思想碰撞有时能带来真正有创意的想法，而有的时候却能让人的思维陷入一片混乱。虽然有其负面效果，但如果妥善利用，头脑风暴就会产生富有成效的结果。

首先，应该以正确的态度对待头脑风暴。头脑风暴不是异想天开，事实上它是非常有趣、有意义的。此外，头脑风暴并不是局限于一个人的思维。正如一句俗话所说：“三个臭皮匠赛过诸葛亮”，集体力量能增强头脑风暴的效果。而且，头脑风暴需要整理、分析、研究并筛选。可以挑选出那些实用性的想法，并深入探讨直到计划成形，而那些不具实用性的想法则应剔除。

总之，如果合理运用，头脑风暴对社会发展是有益的。

范文点评

1. 首段末句点出主题：只要合理利用，头脑风暴会产生好的结果。

2. 围绕主题，分三个层次展开论述，论证了自己的观点。

3. 用一句俗语为例证，更具有说服力。

4. 末句与首段尾句前后呼应，起到了深化主题的作用。

要点用法

confused adj. 困惑的；混乱的

caption n. （图片等的）解说词，说明文字

convey v. 传达或表达

collision n. 碰撞；冲突

chaos n. 混沌；混乱

fantastic adj. 异想天开的

confine to 局限于

single out 挑出；挑选

delve into 钻研；探究

take shape 形成；成形

exclude v. 排除；排斥

句法点评

1. As can be seen in the picture, a woman got confused by a man’s funny hairstyle, which looks like a mass of cloud and the caption under the picture says, “Some days you get a brainstorm, but other days you just get the clouds.”

首句采用了as引导的非限制性定语从句，这是看图作文的常用开篇句式，类似的表达方法还有：As is depicted in the picture...或As is shown/described in the picture...等。

2. It conveys the message that collision of minds sometimes brings some really creative thinking, but sometimes leads the mind into total chaos.

that引导同位语从句，说明message的具体内容。