六级高分作文_工作与娱乐

　工作与娱乐

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on working and having fun by referring to the saying “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy .” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

审题立意

1. 导语解读：要求考生根据“只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻”这句话写一篇关于“工作和娱乐”的文章，可以举例说明。

2. 文章立意：工作和娱乐既彼此对立又紧密联系，要处理好工作和娱乐之间的关系，不能只工作不娱乐，也不能只娱乐不工作。

写作思路

1. 第一段指出工作和娱乐既彼此对立又紧密联系，引出主题。

2. 第二段分别从工作和娱乐两方面对主题进行阐述，说明二者缺一不可。

3. 第三段呼应主题，再一次指出二者是人们生活中必不可少的部分。

参考范文

As the saying goes “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” This shows having fun is essential to life. Working and having fun, on the one hand stand opposite to each other, and on the other hand are closely linked. People should balance the relationship between them and shouldn’t live without either of them. 1

For one thing 2 , working is a means of making a living. Working is the need to realize one’s personal value... Working plays an important role in living. However, people should work moderately and shouldn’t work without having fun. If people work without having fun, they will live under great pressure. They can’t relax their body and mind, which will affect their health. For another 2 , appropriate entertainment is necessary, but all play and no work is also wrong. All play and no work makes people lazy, decadent, and lost, which in the long run will ruin them.

In conclusion 3 , working and having fun are two indispensable parts in one’s life. Without either of them, people will live an incomplete life. So keeping balance between the two is very important. Only with the combination of the two can people live a happy and colorful life. 4

俗话说“只工作不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻”，可见，生活中不能缺少娱乐。工作和娱乐既彼此对立又紧密联系，要处理好工作和娱乐之间的关系，不能只工作不娱乐，也不能只娱乐不工作。

首先，工作是谋生的手段，工作是实现个人价值的需要……工作在生活中扮演着重要的角色。但是工作要适度，不能只工作不娱乐。如果只有工作没有娱乐，人们会生活在极大的压力之下，身心得不到放松，他们的健康会受到影响。其次，适当的娱乐是必要的，但是不可只娱乐不工作。只娱乐不工作会让人变得懒惰、颓废、迷失自我。这样发展下去会毁掉整个人生。

总之，工作和娱乐是生活中两个不可缺少的部分。缺少任何一方，人们的生活都会不完整。因此，平衡二者之间的关系是很重要的。只有把两者结合起来，人们才能过上幸福多彩的生活。

范文点评

1. 首段末尾给出文章主题：工作和娱乐二者缺一不可。

2. 从只工作不娱乐和只娱乐不工作两个方面论证主题。

3. 通过总结，深化主题。

4. 结尾句通过提炼，达到画龙点睛的目的。

要点用法

essential adj. 必要的

opposite to 与……相反

moderately adv. 适度地

entertainment n. 娱乐

decadent adj. 颓废的

indispensable adj. 不可缺少的

句法点评

1. If people work without having fun, they will live under great pressure.

if引导条件状语从句，under pressure表示“在压力之下”。

2. They can’t relax their body and mind, which will affect their health.

which引导非限制性定语从句，修饰主句。

二、漫画、图表类