六级高分作文_如何正确对待批评与恭维?
如何正确对待批评与恭维?
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on handling criticism and compliments properly based on the picture below. You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据漫画的内容就“正确对待批评与恭维”这一话题进行简述，并进行适当展开。
2. 漫画解读：图片上画了一名销售人员正在办公室向一位老板推销一款特殊的助听器，这款助听器的功能是能够过滤掉所有的批评，放大人们的恭维，从而引发人们对于对待批评和恭维的态度的思考。
3. 文章立意：人们都喜欢听恭维之词，却拒绝接受批评。然而，忠言逆耳利于行，一味地过滤掉别人对自己的批评或沉醉于对自己的表扬无异于掩耳盗铃，最终受害的还是自己。因此，人们应该正确地对待批评与恭维。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要描述漫画内容，然后引起话题：有些人不能正确对待批评和恭维。
2. 第二段主要通过对比论证的方式阐述批评对人们成长和发展的好处，以及欺骗性的恭维给人们带来的危害。
3. 第三段提出应该如何正确对待批评和恭维。
参考范文
What we can see from the above picture is that there is a salesman in an office trying to promote a kind of hearing aid, saying: “It’s a special hearing aid. It filers out criticism and amplifies compliments.” 1 Funny though it sounds, it reflects the improper way of handling criticism and compliments, which is not uncommon among some people. 2
There is no doubt that criticism can sometimes do harm to people’s self-confidence and dignity, and compliments can be encouraging. However, it is improper, even wrong, to simply reject criticism and amplify compliments. 3 On the one hand 3 , criticism has tremendous value for one’s growth and development as a human being, such as helping people know their shortcomings and increasing one’s self-awareness, stopping one from erring, etc. On the other hand 3 , compliments, especially deceptive ones made on purpose, will lead to a Pollyanna, i.e. blind optimism, which will hinder one from making correct judgments or decisions or choices.
To conclude, one cannot simply take a negative attitude toward criticism and welcome complements excessively. A proper way is to accept pertinent and beneficial criticism, and refuse insincere compliments. 4
我们从上图中看到一名销售人员正在办公室试图推销一款助听器，说道：“这是一种特殊的助听器。它能够过滤掉批评，放大恭维。”尽管听起来有点儿滑稽，但它反映了一些人普遍存在的问题：不能正确对待批评和恭维。
毫无疑问，批评有时候会对人们的自信和自尊心造成伤害，表扬可以起到鼓励作用。然而，如果只是简单地拒绝批评、放大表扬，这种做法是不恰当的，甚至是错误的。一方面，批评对于人的成长和发展有巨大的价值，比如帮助人们认识自己的不足，增加人们对自己的认识；防止人们犯错误等。另一方面，恭维，尤其带有目的性的、欺骗性的恭维会导致盲目乐观，最终阻碍人们做出正确的判断、决定或选择。
总之，人们不能简单地对批评持否定态度而过分欢迎恭维。恰当的做法是接受中肯而有益的批评，拒绝虚假的表扬。
范文点评
1. 开篇简要描述图片的内容。
2. 自然过渡，结合图片内容准确传递出这幅漫画的寓意。
3. 明确表达本文的主要观点：不能简单地拒绝批评，放大恭维，并从正反两方面论证批评给人的成长和发展带来的好处，以及恭维（尤其虚假恭维）的危害。
4. 末段总结全文，重申观点，并提出正确对待批评和恭维的方法。
要点用法
hearing aid 助听器
filter out 过滤，滤除
amplify v. 扩大，放大
do harm to 对……有害
dignity n. 自尊心
tremendous adj. 巨大的
deceptive adj. 欺骗性的
on purpose 故意地
Pollyanna n. 盲目乐观的人
hinder v. 阻碍，妨碍
negative adj. 否定的
pertinent adj. 中肯的，恰当的
insincere adj. 虚假的，不真诚的
句法点评
1. Funny though it sounds, it reflects the improper way of handling criticism and compliments, which is not uncommon among some people.
首段末句采用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，该从句使用了双重否定，即not uncommon,加强了表达的语气。
2. On the other hand, compliments, especially deceptive ones made on purpose, will lead to a Pollyanna, i.e. blind optimism, which will hinder one from making correct judgments or decisions or choices.
该句中especially deceptive ones made on purpose为插入语，其中过去分词短语made on purpose作后置定语，修饰deceptive compliments；i.e.意为“也就是，亦即”，后面紧接解释内容，作同位语。
