六级高分作文_高考加分政策

　高考加分政策

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the additional score policy of the National College Entrance Examination based on the picture below. You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

审题立意

1. 导语解读：要求考生根据漫画的内容就“高考加分政策”这一话题进行简述，并根据图画内容进行评价。

2. 漫画解读：图片上画了一名高校招生录取人员正在用放大镜观察高考成绩。高考成绩就像一棵大树，长满了各种加分的枝杈。这名招生人员不禁感叹：“这么多啊！”由此引发人们对高考加分政策的思考。

3. 文章立意：高考加分政策一直以来都是人们热议的话题之一。在高考“一分定生死”的残酷竞争中，“加分”的意义之重大不言而喻。加分的初衷是弥补高校招生制度的不足，鼓励学生注重全面素质的提高，但是现行的高考加分政策还存在一些弊端，亟需改进。

写作思路

1. 第一段简要描述漫画内容，然后提出论点：现行的高考加分政策给人们造成困惑。

2. 第二段主要通过举例论证的方式阐述现行高考加分政策中的问题，如腐败问题和不公平问题。

3. 第三段呼应文章论点，针对问题提出应对建议。

参考范文

As is shown in the above picture, a recruiter is examining the final scores of the National College Entrance Examination (NCEE) with a magnifier. According to his observation, the final result of NCEE is like a big tree with so many branches of additional scores that it astonishes him, which implies the confusion that the policy of additional score of NCEE has brought to people. 1

Undeniably, the policy of additional score originally aims to compensate for the limitations of NCEE and encourage students’ overall development. 2 However, there are some problems arising, with corruption being the first one. 3 Because of the loose design and non-transparent implementation processes, it is easy for some powerful people to take advantage of the policy. For example 4 , the students whose parents are in power can easily obtain additional scores by getting athletes technical grading certificates. Another problem is injustice. 3 NCEE is an academic examination for entrance into higher education institutions, so the policy of additional score is unfair to those students with higher academic ability.

In conclusion, there exist some problems in the current policy of additional score of NCEE. It is suggested that the policy be designed more strictly and be implemented more transparently. 5

如上图所示，一名招生人员正在用放大镜观察高考成绩。根据他的观察，高考成绩就像一棵大树，长满如此多种加分的枝杈，连他都震惊不已。这表明了高考加分政策给人们带来的困惑。

不可否认，高考加分政策的本意是弥补高考的缺陷和鼓励学生全面发展。然而，这种政策却产生了一些问题，第一个便是腐败问题。由于加分政策设计不够严密，执行程序不够透明，这种政策很容易被一些有权力的人利用。比如，那些父母当权的学生能够轻易地获得运动员技术等级资格证书从而获得高考加分。另一个问题是不公平。高考是进入高等教育机构的学术考试，加分对于有真正高水平的学生不公平。

总之，现行的高考加分政策中存在一些问题。建议加分政策的设计更加严密一些，执行程序更加透明一些。

范文点评

1. 开篇简要描述图片的内容，同时结合图片内容准确传递出这幅漫画的寓意。

2. 自然过渡，引出高考加分政策的本意是好的，为下文转折做准备。

3. 明确表达本文的主要观点：高考加分政策存在一些问题。并从两方面论证。

4. 采用举例论证，通过典型例证，增强说服力，同时也体现了论证方法的多样性。

5. 末段总结全文，重申观点，并针对问题提出建议。

要点用法

recruiter n. 招聘人员；招收人员

magnifier n. 放大镜

imply v. 表明，说明

confusion n. 困惑，不知所措

undeniably adv. 不可否认

compensate for 弥补，补偿

overall development 全面发展

corruption n. 腐败，贪污

non-transparent adj . 不透明

implementation n. 实施，执行

take advantage of 利用

injustice n. 不公平，不公正

句法点评

1. According to his observation, the final result of NCEE is like a big tree with so many branches of additional scores that it astonishes him, which implies the confusion that the policy of additional score of NCEE has brought to people.

首段末句采用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，引申图片传达的真实寓意，在图画作文中，这是将图画内容的真实意义表达出来的常用句型，总结为This/It obviously implies that + 从句或者This implies + 名词（短语）。

2. It is suggested that the policy be designed more strictly and be implemented more transparently.

It is suggested that...为固定句型，通常用于针对某些问题提出建议，其他替换句型还有It is recommended that..., it is advised that...等，注意that从句应使用虚拟语气，其中，should一词可以省略。