六级高分作文_互联网对交友的影响
互联网对交友的影响
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the impact of Internet on making friends based on the picture below. You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生根据漫画的内容就“互联网对交友的影响”这一话题进行论述。
2. 漫画解读：图片上画了一个小女孩儿和她的妈妈就交朋友这个话题在进行面对面的交流。由注解文字可知，小女孩在学校不受大家喜欢，在脸谱社交网站上只有735个朋友，由此引发大家对互联网对交友影响的思考。
3. 文章立意：每个人都需要朋友。如今，随着科技的发展，人们不仅仅可以在现实生活中交朋友，还可以在网上交朋友。然而，网络交友有利有弊，大家应该慎重对待。
写作思路
1. 第一段简要描述漫画内容，突出互联网对人们交友的影响之大。
2. 第二段通过举例、引用等论证方式阐述网络交友的利弊：网络对交友有很多积极的影响，比如对内向的人来说就是一种不错的交友途径。但由于互联网的虚幻性，它又存在危险。
3. 第三段提出互联网交友趋势不可逆转，人们应该谨慎对待，好好利用网络而不是过度依赖网络。
参考范文
As is revealed in the cartoon, a girl is talking about her friends with her mother, saying “I’m the least popular girl in school. I only have 735 Facebook friends!” 1 The girl’s remark may seem to be a paradox, yet after a careful thought we can’t help feeling the great impact that Internet has on the way people make friends. 2
Undoubtedly, Internet has some positive effects on making friends. 3 It enables people to make friends from different places. 3 Also, it makes it easier for introverted people who are too shy to approach others in reality to make friends online, just like the girl in the picture. 3 Every coin has two sides, so does making friends through Internet. 3 For example, as the network life is fictitious, it is easy to cheat another person online. The newspaper often reports that there are some people getting hurt or being killed when they date their net friends. 4
As far as I’m concerned, it is irreversible that Internet is changing people’s way of making friends. What people should do is being careful and make good use of it instead of being overly dependent on it. 5
如图所示，一个女孩儿正在和她的妈妈聊她的朋友，她说道：“我在学校里是最不受喜欢的女孩儿，我在脸谱社交网上只有735个朋友。”这个女孩儿的话可能看起来有点儿自相矛盾，不过仔细思考后，我们不禁感叹互联网对人们交友的影响之大。
毫无疑问，互联网能够对交友产生一些积极的影响。网络使得人们能够与来自不同地方的人交朋友。同样，它使得那些在现实中过于羞涩、不敢主动与人交谈的内向的人更容易在网上交到朋友，就像图画中的小女孩一样。事物都有两面性，互联网交友也是如此。比如，由于互联网生活是虚幻的，欺骗别人是很容易的。报纸上经常有关于人们去见网友而受伤或遇害的报道。
在我看来，互联网正在改变人们的交友方式，这是不可逆转的。人们应该小心交友，充分利用互联网而不要过度依赖它。
范文点评
1. 开篇描述图片的内容。
2. 自然过渡，结合图片中的文字准确传递出这幅漫画的寓意。
3. 从两个方面论证了互联网对于交友的好处，从另一个方面论证了利用互联网交友的弊端，论据充分，论证有力。
4. 采用举例论证，恰如其分，同时也体现了论证方法的多样性。
5. 末段总结全文，表达作者观点，指出利用互联网交友这一趋势不可逆转，人们应利用好互联网而不是过度依赖它。
要点用法
reveal v. 显示，表明
paradox n. 自相矛盾的说法
have effects on 对……有影响
introverted adj. 内向的，含蓄的
approach v. 接近，靠近
fictitious adj. 虚幻的，虚构的
net friend 网友
irreversible adj. 不可逆转的
dependent on 依赖于，依靠
句法点评
1. Every coin has two sides, so does making friends through Internet.
该句是四、六级作文中分析利弊时常用的过渡句式，从分析优点自然过渡到分析缺点。相似的说法还有Just as every coin has two sides, it is true of making friends through Internet。
2. What people should do is being careful and make good use of it instead of being overly dependent on it.
名词性从句What people should do作主语，也可改为All that people should do。
