六级高分作文_大学生自主创业的利弊

　大学生自主创业的利弊

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the advantages and disadvantages of college student self- employment based on the picture below. You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

审题立意

1. 导语解读：要求考生根据漫画的内容就“大学生创业”这一话题进行简述，并解释自主创业的优缺点。

2. 漫画解读：图片上画了一个写有“大学生创业”的巨大磁铁，吸引了大批刚从学校出来的毕业生。

3. 文章立意：受到大学生就业形势黯淡和政府对大学生自主创业政策支持的影响，很多大学生在毕业后选择自主创业。然而，任何事情都有两面性，自主创业固然有不少好处，也存在一些缺点。

写作思路

1. 第一段简要描述图画内容，提出大学生自主创业的原因。

2. 第二段分析大学生自主创业的优点和缺点，每个方面都是从社会和个人两个角度进行解析。

3. 第三段呼应文章论点，提出只要大学生不怕困难，仔细准备，创业还是值得一试的。

参考范文

As is revealed in the picture, self-employment is like a magnet, attracting a large number of newly graduated college students. 1 Considering the bleak employment situation and the government’s encouragement policies towards college students, it is no surprise that so many graduates choose self-employment instead of finding a job. 2

Self-employment can bring many benefits to the society as well as to the students themselves. 3 For the society, college students starting their own business can ease the pressure of employment. For the students, not only can they put what they learn at school into practice, but also have an opportunity to improve their innovation abilities by combining their theoretical knowledge with social practice. However, college student self-employment also has some disadvantages. 4 For one thing, due to the limitations of college students themselves, such as lack of experience, connections and well-considered plans, etc., it is not easy for them to be successful, thus causing waste of social resources. For another, once they fail in self-employment, they can easily feel depressed and have a breakdown.

In my opinion 5 , as long as the students realize the difficulties and make full preparation, it is worth trying to start their own business. After all, where there is a will, there is a way. 6

如图所示，自主创业就像一块磁铁，吸引着大批的大学应届毕业生。考虑到黯淡的就业形势和政府对大学生就业的鼓励政策，如此多的毕业生选择自主创业而不是就业就不足为奇了。

创业可以为社会和大学生个人带来不少好处。对于社会而言，大学生自主创业能够缓解社会就业压力。对于大学生个人而言，他们不仅可以把在学校学到的知识应用于实践，而且有机会通过将理论知识和社会实践结合起来提高自己的创新能力。然而，大学生创业也会有一些缺点。一方面，由于大学生自身的局限性，如缺乏经验、人脉和考虑周详的计划，他们很难取得成功，从而可能造成社会资源的浪费。另一方面，一旦他们创业失败，他们很容易心情沮丧，甚至精神崩溃。

在我看来，只要大学生意识到创业存在的困难并做好充分的准备，创业还是值得一试的。毕竟，有志者事竟成。

范文点评

1. 开篇简要描述图片的内容，大学生创业极具吸引力。

2. 自然过渡，引出大批学生创业的原因。

3. 分两个角度论证创业的优点：对个人和社会均有利。

4. 分两个层次论证创业的缺点，论据充分，论证有力。

5. 末段发表个人看法，鼓励大学生在考虑周全的情况下可以尝试自主创业。

6. 引用谚语，使文章生动，同时增强了论证的说服力。

要点用法

magnet n. 磁铁，磁铁石

bleak adj. 黯淡的，无光的

ease v. 缓解，减轻

pressure n. 压力

innovation n. 创新，革新

depressed adj. 沮丧的，忧郁的

breakdown n. 崩溃

句法点评

1. As is revealed in the picture, self-employment is like a magnet, attracting a large number of newly graduated college students.

首句采用了as引导的非限制性定语从句，主句采用比喻的修辞手法，还包含现在分词attracting引导的成分作伴随状语。

2. For one thing, due to the limitations of college students themselves, such as lack of experience, connections and well-considered plans, etc., it is not easy for them to be successful, thus causing waste of social resources.

这句话中包含了现在分词causing引导的成分作结果状语。本句的主句为it形式主语句型。