六级高分作文_体育精神

　体育精神

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on sportsmanship according to the following situation. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

Suppose you have watched the FIFA World Cup finals and you get excited about the game, what’s the most appealing to you about the game and what kind of sportsmanship you have felt?

审题立意

1. 导语解读：要求考生根据情景内容就“体育精神”这一话题进行写作。

2. 情景解读：假设你观看了足球世界杯决赛圈的比赛，简单介绍该比赛最吸引人之处及其所体现出的体育精神。

3. 文章立意：比赛中，体育精神是支撑运动员坚持到最后的重要因素；同样这种精神也适用于普通人，若想实现自己的理想，也应秉承这一精神。

写作思路

1. 第一段简要描述足球世界杯最吸引你的地方，然后提出比赛体现出了“永不放弃”的体育精神。

2. 第二段通过因果分析和举例说明的方法阐述这种体育精神，体育赛事体现体育精神，新闻报道也宣传体育精神。

3. 第三段呼应文章论点，再次强调“永不放弃”的体育精神对有梦想的普通人同样有益。

参考范文

Among all the matches of 2014 FIFA World Cup, the most appealing to me was the one between Argentina and Iran in which Messi scored the goal in stoppage time and put Argentina through to the last 16. 1 I will never forget the day on which a kind of sportsmanship called “Never give up” astounded me. 2

“Never give up” is easier said than done. In any sports events, nearly every sportsman is ever tested to the utmost. However 3 , there is only one gold medal, and people would never know who the winner will be until the last minute. Hence 3 , if they gave up halfway, their chances of tasting victory would be zero forever. That’s why we often hear in sports news that many competitors continue their trainings and contests with their injuries and illnesses. 3 It is the sportsmanship that stimulates them to persist in the end.

As for me—an ordinary person, I have an unshakeable faith in the spirit of perseverance while doing everything that is worth doing. Never give up your dream no matter what difficulties you might encounter on the path to it. 4

在2014国际足联世界杯所有的比赛中，最吸引我的是阿根廷对伊朗的比赛。在那场比赛中，梅西在补时阶段的进球使阿根廷挤进16强。我永远不会忘记那一天，有一种叫做“永不放弃”的体育精神震撼了我。

“永不放弃”说起来容易做起来难。在任何体育赛事中，几乎每个运动员都接受过极限的考验。然而，金牌只有一枚，不到最后一分钟永远不会知道赢家是谁。因此，如果半途而废，就永远没有机会品尝胜利的滋味。这就是为什么从体育新闻中我们经常会听到许多运动员带伤带病坚持训练和参赛的消息。激励着他们坚持到最后的就是体育精神。

至于像我这样的普通人，在做每一件值得去做的事情的时候，都会对坚持不懈的精神怀有一种毫不动摇的信念。无论在通往梦想的道路上会遇到多少困难，请永远不要放弃。

范文点评

1. 开篇简要描述情景内容，并根据作文要求指出最吸引人的是比赛中梅西在补时阶段的进球。

2. 自然过渡，引出自己的观点，紧扣作文话题。

3. 通过因果分析和举例说明的方法进行立论，陈述自己的观点，并巧妙使用承上启下的连接词。

4. 末段总结全文，重申观点“永不放弃”，并指出非体育界的追梦人也应怀有坚持不懈的信念。

要点用法

stoppage time 补时阶段

put through 完成；使通过

astound v. 使震撼

utmost n. 极限

stimulate v. 激励

persist v. 坚持

as for 至于

unshakeable adj. 坚定不移的

perseverance n. 坚持不懈

encounter v. 遭遇

句法点评

1. However, there is only one gold medal, and people would never know who the winner will be until the last minute.

这个句子使用了“not...until...”结构，引导时间状语从句。

2. Never give up your dream no matter what difficulties you might encounter on the path to it.