六级高分作文_冬天来了，春天还会远吗?
冬天来了，春天还会远吗?
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay commenting on the famous verse by the British poet Percy Bysshe Shelley, “If winter comes, can spring be far behind ?” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
审题立意
1. 导语解读：要求考生通过评述英国诗人雪莱的著名诗句“春天来了，冬天还会远吗？”写一篇短文。
2. 文章立意：“冬天来了，春天还会远吗？”寓示着艰难困苦终将过去，只要再坚持一下，就可以渡过难关，迎来春天，这提醒我们始终抱着积极的人生态度，即使身处困境，也要满怀希望，奋斗不息，永不放弃。
写作思路
1. 第一段介绍雪莱的诗句，揭示其寓意：困难很快就会过去，我们要充满希望，坚持到底。
2. 第二段论述失败和困难是生活中绕不过去的坎儿，只有勇敢地面对困难和失败，才能继续前行。
3. 第三段论述如何面对和克服困难。
参考范文
The famous remark “If winter comes, can spring be far behind?” means that difficulties will pass by very soon and we should not feel frustrated. 1 It reminds us to face the difficulty bravely and never to give up. 2
As a matter of fact, life is a mixture of success and failure as well as a combination of happiness and sadness. So we have to consider what we can do to tap our strengths to overcome difficulties and keep going when times are tough or we are confronted with hardships and even defeats. 3 Then how can we overcome difficulties? 4
For one thing 5 , hold a positive attitude toward your life. Enthusiastic attitude towards hardships is a crucial factor that will determine whether you can be successful or not. It allows you to rise up to any challenge in your life. For another 5 , set ambitious goals for yourself. Once you establish your goals, you will motivate yourself to achieve them step by step and the difficulties along the way will never stop you. Therefore, we need to make full use of our potentials to face the challenges and enjoy the pleasure of overcoming difficulties. 6
名言“如果冬天来了，春天还会远吗？”意味着艰难困苦会很快消逝，我们不应为其感到沮丧。这句话提醒我们要勇敢地去克服困难，决不放弃。
事实上，生活是成功与失败、快乐与悲伤的混合体。所以，当我们面对艰难困苦甚至失败的时候，我们要想如何才能集中力量克服困难而继续前进。那么，如何才能克服困难呢？
首先，要对生活抱有积极的态度。对待困难的热诚态度是决定你成功与否的重要因素。它让你去应对你生活中遇到的任何挑战。其次，要设定一个有野心的目标。一旦有了目标，你就会激发自己一步一步去实现梦想，遇到困难也绝不会停下脚步。因此，我们要充分利用我们的潜能去面对挑战并且享受克服困难所带来的快乐。
范文点评
1. 开篇引入引语并简要阐释引语的含义。
2. 借引语含义引出克服困难的话题。
3. 阐述困难和失败乃生活之常事，因此必须勇于面对和克服它们，而不能逃避。
4. 承上启下，引出该如何克服困难。
5. 从两个方面阐述如何克服困难，条理清晰，层次分明。
6. 末句总结全文，指出我们应克服困难并享受克服困难所带来的快乐。
要点用法
frustrated adj. 沮丧的
combination n. 混合物；结合；组合
be confronted with 面临；面对
rise up to 迎接，应对
ambitious adj. 有雄心的
make full use of 充分利用
potential n. 潜能，潜力 adj. 潜在的
句法点评
1. As a matter of fact, life is a mixture of success and failure as well as a combination of happiness and sadness.
本句中as well as表示“也，而且”，意思上相当于and，连接两个并列、对等成分：a mixture of success and failure和a combination of happiness and sadness。
2. Enthusiastic attitude towards hardships is a crucial factor that will determine whether you can be successful or not.
本句中that引导定语从句，该定语从句中嵌套着whether...or not引导的宾语从句，作determine的宾语。
