六级高分作文_放下包袱

　放下包袱

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should describe the picture, explain its intended meaning and then state how you will develop your ability to ease your burden . You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

审题立意

1. 导语解读：要求考生根据漫画的内容就“放下包袱”这一话题进行简述，并阐述如何培养能力放下包袱。

2. 文章立意：雄心、抱负、理想等刺激我们不断地追求，但如果包袱过重，压力过大，我们一定无法支撑太久。因此，放下包袱、轻松前行很重要。

写作思路

1. 第一段简要描述漫画内容，然后提出论点：放下包袱很重要。

2. 第二段承上启下，通过设问的方式提出如何放下包袱。

3. 第三段至最后为主体段落，从两个方面论述如何放下包袱。

参考范文

As is shown by the drawing, a man could have gone easily with the bike but the heavy burden on his back almost overwhelmed him and he was too exhausted to go further. 1 The drawing is indicative of a phenomenon that many people tend to bear many burdens while not knowing how to ease them. 2 However, there’s no doubt that to ease the burden is of great importance to everyone. 3

How to develop your ability to ease the burden? In my opinion, there are some good ways to do that. 4

Learn to give up something unnecessary. There are probably many things you want to achieve. But due to the limited time and resources, it is impossible to achieve everything you want. If you try to do too many things at once, you’ll have to bear heavy burdens, which may give rise to your breakdown. You need to choose and prioritize. 5

Learn to reduce your stress. Pursuing too many things means giving you unnecessary pressure. Don’t let your ambition hinder you from enjoying your life. Avoid spreading yourself too thin and free up time to build meaningful relationships. 5

Only in this way can we lead a well-balanced life. 6

如图所示，一个人骑车本可以很轻松地行走，但是他背上的重负几乎将他压垮，导致他太累而无法继续走下去了。图片表明了一种现象，很多人往往都能承受负担，却不知道如何减轻负担。然而，减轻负担对于每一个人来说无疑都十分重要。

如何才能培养你减轻负担的能力呢？我认为，这里有几个很好的方法。

学着放弃一些不必要的事情。也许有很多事都是你想去完成的。但是由于时间有限，资源有限，完成你想要的所有事情是不可能的。如果你试图一次办成过多事情，你就不得不承受沉重的负担，这可能会导致你崩溃。你需要做出选择和区分轻重缓急。

学着去减压。追求太多的事物意味着给自己太多不必要的压力。不要让你的野心阻止你享受生活。不要让自己同时做很多事情而心力交瘁，腾出时间去结交有意义的朋友。

只有这样，我们才能有一个平衡的生活。

范文点评

1. 开篇简要描述图片的内容。

2. 自然过渡，引出放下包袱这一话题。

3. 首段末句明确表达自己的观点：放下包袱很重要。

4. 第二段承上启下，用设问提出如何放下包袱。

5. 分两个层次论证了自己的观点，论据充分，论证有力。

6. 末段总结全文，指出放下包袱的重要性。

要点用法

overwhelm v. 压倒，压垮

exhausted adj. 精疲力竭的

be indicative of 暗示，表示

bear v. 承受

give rise to 引起、导致某事物 breakdown n. 崩溃

prioritize v. 优先考虑

free up 空出来

well-balanced adj. 平衡的

句法点评

1. As is shown by the drawing, a man could have gone easily with the bike but the heavy burden on his back almost overwhelmed him and he was too exhausted to go further.

此句中could have gone 是情态动词+ have done的用法，表示本可以做成某事却没有做成，是一种虚拟语气。

2. The drawing is indicative of a phenomenon that many people tend to bear many burdens while not knowing how to ease them.

此句中that引导的是同位语从句，具体解释phenomenon的内容。